EDIT: Leatherman Squirt P4 INITIAL REPORT
- Hi Brian
Thanks for the report. It was very well written!
I'm the first to admit that I'm a Geologist, not an English Teacher!
Below are a few comments and corrections. Please re-edit your report
and upload it to the BGT.org site.
man from beast -> technically should be man from a beast
Like Swiss Army knife, -> should read: Like the Swiss Army Knife
I was a surprised -> should read: I was surprised (loose the "a")
It is, after all called the "Squirt" -> should read: It is, after
all, called the "Squirt"
a medium and extra-small common, and a small phillips -> should read:
a medium- and extra-small standard, and a small Phillips. I believe
that screwdrivers are referred to as "standard" and "Philips".
Every day, the squirt -> should read: Every day, the Squirt
Its smallish size -> should read: Its small size
Sonjia, Leatherman Squirt Monitor
P.S. Sorry if this double-posts. Netscape is being wierd.
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