EDIT: Re: [BackpackGearTest] ULA-Equipmemt P-1 Long Term report
- Hi Mara
As your test monitor does not appear to have provided you with any feedback
on this report, I will jump in. Please see below for my comments.
At 08:53 PM 28/07/2002, you wrote:
> This initial test of the pack with the hipbelt proved to me that the### I am not sure that this sentence reads right with the use of LIKELY
> hipbelt likely provided me all the additional
>comfort I would need to use the pack for longer hikes.
between hipbelt and provided. I don't really have a solution but :-(
>I found 20 pound carried quite comfortably for long distances. While the### I am a little unclear as to your message here, i.e., I am not sure that
>hipbelt didn't take as much transferred weight as it might on a heavier
>pack, I found the stability the hipbelt offered and the almost intermittant
>weight transfer made the pack a joy to carry.
INTERMITTANT is the correct word here, but I could be wrong ...
>Other observations:### This sentence may read better if you replaced THAN with TO.
>This is different than what I experienced without the hipbelt.
>Here's what happened:### Missing AN between sent AND email.
>When collecting measurements and options for the individual packs, Brian
>sent email to each tester outlining the measurements he needed.
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