83005Edit/Approval OR- Steripen Adventure Opti- Nancy Griffith
- Aug 5 3:43 PMNancy,
Nice review! Only a couple of minor edits (below) and you are good to go. When ready upload to:
Water Treatment > Ultraviolet > SteriPEN Adventurer Opti
And of course don't forget to delete your test folder :)
I like my Opti too, but like you I've never gotton 50 L from a set of new (non-rechargable) batteries.
###To use the pen I press the button once for a 1L dose or twice for a half liter dose.
EDIT: needs space between 1 and L (to be consistent with your other liter citations)
###I have been using the Steripen for the past two years and have used the Steripen on at
least twenty-five backpacking trips including a 21-day hike of the John Muir Trail.
Edit: a comma after "trips" would improve readability
###The only trips where I don't take the Steripen are those where we are mainly staying in
a base camp but those are rare.
Edit: a comma after "camp" would help the sentence scan better
###Ok, but that still isn't 50 L of life. She also recommended that I remove the batteries
between trips since they'll drain much more quickly if left in the device. I followed this
recommendation and got 27 L of life on the next set of batteries
EDIT: OK (all caps)
Comment: That's also been my experience, From your contact with customer service it sounds like that's important for battery life.