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82722Edit/Approval: OR Tubbs Xpedition Snowshoes - Bob Dorenfeld

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  • rayestrella1
    Apr 6, 2014
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      Hi Bob,


      Thanks for the review in answer to the call. This is a very thorough review, good job. I just have a few edits for you, after which you may place the corrected review at:


      Reviews > Snow Gear > Snowshoes > Tubbs Xpedition Snowshoes



      See you down the trail,





      ***Both front and back of the shoe is turned up to optimmize travel through snow.


      EDIT: optimize




      *** For the the Xpedition, Tubbs uses a quick-attach and -release mechanism


      EDIT: delete extra “the”




      ***An upturned rear of each snowshoe helps to minimize drag on the forward step.


      Edit: I think you want to start with “The” instead of “An”

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