82722Edit/Approval: OR Tubbs Xpedition Snowshoes - Bob Dorenfeld
- Apr 6 9:38 AM
Thanks for the review in answer to the call. This is a very thorough review, good job. I just have a few edits for you, after which you may place the corrected review at:
See you down the trail,
***Both front and back of the shoe is turned up to optimmize travel through snow.
*** For the the Xpedition, Tubbs uses a quick-attach and -release mechanism
EDIT: delete extra “the”
***An upturned rear of each snowshoe helps to minimize drag on the forward step.
Edit: I think you want to start with “The” instead of “An”
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