82690Re: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - Bis Agnes Fly Creek UL1 - Marina Batzke
- Mar 5 6:30 AMMarina, Not a problem. The answers to your questions:1) Is it ok to list the price of the gear loft? ... designed to connect to a triangular-shaped mesh Gear Loft, available for an additional $22.This is OK so long as it's BA's MSRP. You might say "available (MSRP:$22)" If it's a retail price it should be deleted....2) I am writing ultralight, lightweight without - now throughout the OR. Is the following a correct separation of words then?To be ultralight weight, the tent skimps …Up to you - I'd make "ultralightweight" one word.
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