81424Re: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - REI mini - Nancy Griffith
- Jun 4, 2012Thanks Richard. The changes have been made and file uploaded (and test file deleted).
See you again!
From: "richardglyon@..." <montana.angler@...>
Sent: Sunday, June 3, 2012 9:13 PM
Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - REI mini - Nancy Griffith
If up to me you'd get a BP. A few edits in the usal format, then you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/6pzkvdt Don't forget to delete your Tests/OR folder copy.
<<Listed Weight: 3.2 oz (91 g)
Measured Weight: 0.3 oz (8.5 g)>>
Edit: For emphasis, I'd move your comment below on this discrepancy up to here, in parentheses or brackets.
<<Size: 6.5 x 1.25 x 0.5 in (16.5 x 3.2 x 1.3 cm)>>
EDIT: These are listed dimensions. Please add measured dimensions.
<<I bought the REI mini-spatula about 5 years ago to expand my cooking utensils. >>
Edit: A style suggestion (and entirely up to you): single digits in text are easier to read if written out – "five years"
<<La Verkin Creek Trail, Zion National Park (Utah): 3 days; 20 mi (32 km); 5,413
to 6,070 ft (1,650 to 1,850 m) elevation; 40 to 75 F (4 to 24 C).
Wonderland Trail, Mount Rainier National Park, Washington: 11 days; 100 mi (161
km); 2,600 to 7,200 ft (792 to 2,195 m) elevation; 32 to 62 F (0 to 17 C).
Ohlone Trail, Northern California: 3 days; 30 mi (48 km); 390 to 3,800 ft (119
to 1,158 m) elevation; 36 to 60 F (2 to 16 C).
Sequoia National Park, Sierra Nevada, California: 6 days, 60 miles (97 km);
6,700 to 11,600 ft (2,000 to 3,500 m) elevation; 38 to 84 F (3 to 29 C).
Hunters Trail, Sierra Nevada (California): 3 days; 21 mi (34 km); 3,500 to 5,000
ft (1,067 to 1,524 m); 35 to 63 F (1.7 to 17.2 C)>>
EDIT: Whenever you round off one set of measurements, so should you round off the others.
<<As with any plasticware I have to be careful to not allow it to get too hot or the narrow tip will melt.>>
EDIT: As written this is projection unless the tip actually melted. "get too hot for fear the narrow tip will melt."
<<I'm happy to bring it along on trips that include a wide variety of menu items especially for cooking eggs.>>
EDIT: and especially for cooking eggs
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