80177Re: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - Hilleberg Atko - Cheryl McMurray
- Apr 11, 2011Hi Richard,
Thanks so much for your edits. They are done and the report is uploaded. I just saw your review on the Unna. I sensed that you were familiar with their tents. I'm looking forward to reading it in detail.
On Apr 11, 2011, at 3:24 PM, richardglyon wrote:
> Excellent report, and particularly informative photos. Some edits, in the usual format; after revising you may upload at http://tinyurl.com/42xkted Be sure to delete your Test/Owner Review folder copy.
> I have one general Edit for you to consider. I'd like to know the size of the vestibule, especially since you report on cooking in it. Strictly up to you, however.
> Cheers, Richard
> <<Manufacturer Website: www.hilleberg.com>>
> EDIT: Hilleberg has two websites: <<www.hilleberg.se>> for Europe and the one you identify for the rest of the world. As Hilleberg is based in Sweden, I'd say the former is "home," but I'd list both.
> <<MSRP: $420 US>>
> EDIT: Now $430 in North America and EUR 479 in Europe. I'd list both.
> <<The Hilleberg Akto tent is a solo single pole tunnel tent that is considered to be an all weather, lightweight shelter. >>
> Edit: single-pole [with a hyphen]
> <<There is one 9mm (.35 in) pole that goes through a continuous dead end sleeve that is located at the center of the outer tent >>
> EDIT: 9 mm [with a space] (0.35 in) [Too easy to miss that little period]
> <<Round Valley, San Jacinto Mts, Southern California>>
> Edit: Mountains [optional here]
> <<Eagle Pk, Joshua Tree National Park, >>
> EDIT: Peak or Park?
> << The winds blew all night at approximately 30 mph (48 kph) but I never felt any affect of it. >>
> EDIT: effect of it
> In fact, I slept really well and was able to eliminate any worry of how I was going
> << I woke up, I was amazed as to how warm and quiet it was inside the tent. >>
> Comment: Are Hilleberg tents wonderful!
> <<I can lay back without touching the ceiling of the inner tent >>
> EDIT: lie back
> <<It would be nice if there was a storage pocket at both ends.>>
> Edit: if there were
> << There are some gear loops inside but the only thing that I have used those for is to hang and very small light for quick access. >>
> EDIT: There's a garble here. "a very small light" (?) Please revise.
> <<The vestibule has an impressive amount of room it it since the pole goes through a sleeve in the outer tent >>
> EDIT: room in it
> <<The Akto has two semi-circle vents at each end of the outer tent >>
> Edit: semicircular vents
> <<On the trip to the San Jacinto Mts, there was not a lot of wind >>
> EDIT: Mountains [mandatory here]
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