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80177Re: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - Hilleberg Atko - Cheryl McMurray

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  • Cheryl Mcmurray
    Apr 11, 2011
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      Hi Richard,
      Thanks so much for your edits. They are done and the report is uploaded. I just saw your review on the Unna. I sensed that you were familiar with their tents. I'm looking forward to reading it in detail.
      On Apr 11, 2011, at 3:24 PM, richardglyon wrote:

      > Cheryl,
      > Excellent report, and particularly informative photos. Some edits, in the usual format; after revising you may upload at http://tinyurl.com/42xkted Be sure to delete your Test/Owner Review folder copy.
      > I have one general Edit for you to consider. I'd like to know the size of the vestibule, especially since you report on cooking in it. Strictly up to you, however.
      > Cheers, Richard
      > <<Manufacturer Website: www.hilleberg.com>>
      > EDIT: Hilleberg has two websites: <<www.hilleberg.se>> for Europe and the one you identify for the rest of the world. As Hilleberg is based in Sweden, I'd say the former is "home," but I'd list both.
      > <<MSRP: $420 US>>
      > EDIT: Now $430 in North America and EUR 479 in Europe. I'd list both.
      > <<The Hilleberg Akto tent is a solo single pole tunnel tent that is considered to be an all weather, lightweight shelter. >>
      > Edit: single-pole [with a hyphen]
      > <<There is one 9mm (.35 in) pole that goes through a continuous dead end sleeve that is located at the center of the outer tent >>
      > EDIT: 9 mm [with a space] (0.35 in) [Too easy to miss that little period]
      > <<Round Valley, San Jacinto Mts, Southern California>>
      > Edit: Mountains [optional here]
      > <<Eagle Pk, Joshua Tree National Park, >>
      > EDIT: Peak or Park?
      > << The winds blew all night at approximately 30 mph (48 kph) but I never felt any affect of it. >>
      > EDIT: effect of it
      > In fact, I slept really well and was able to eliminate any worry of how I was going
      > << I woke up, I was amazed as to how warm and quiet it was inside the tent. >>
      > Comment: Are Hilleberg tents wonderful!
      > <<I can lay back without touching the ceiling of the inner tent >>
      > EDIT: lie back
      > <<It would be nice if there was a storage pocket at both ends.>>
      > Edit: if there were
      > << There are some gear loops inside but the only thing that I have used those for is to hang and very small light for quick access. >>
      > EDIT: There's a garble here. "a very small light" (?) Please revise.
      > <<The vestibule has an impressive amount of room it it since the pole goes through a sleeve in the outer tent >>
      > EDIT: room in it
      > <<The Akto has two semi-circle vents at each end of the outer tent >>
      > Edit: semicircular vents
      > <<On the trip to the San Jacinto Mts, there was not a lot of wind >>
      > EDIT: Mountains [mandatory here]

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