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79775EDIT / APPROVAL: OR- Montbell UL Inner Jacket - Nancy Griffith

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  • Michael Williams
    Nov 6, 2010
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      Hi Nancy,




      Nice Owner Review, your initial edits will follow. They will take the following

      format;



      EDIT: must be changed

      Edit: should be changed but will be left to your discretion

      Comment: just that or something to think about



      Once you have fixed them feel free to post your review here:



      http://www.backpackgeartest.org/reviews/Clothing/Jackets/MontBell%20UL%20Down%20Inner%20Jacket/



      or



      http://tinyurl.com/2aykaqg





      Just a reminder to delete your test HTML file.



      Thanks for your contribution.



      Mike

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      <<Manufacturer's Website: http://www.montbell.us

      Comment:  On the majority of your reports, this is a linkable hypertext
      directly to the manufacturer.  Did you miss building this link in your
      test HTML?

      <<The benefit is weight savings. 

      Comment:  It may be beneficial to identify any drawbacks with the
      construction such as it isn’t as warm as a baffled construction.















      <<There is a montbell logo near the hem. 

      EDIT:  “montbell” should be capitalized.

       

      <<The jacket is great for taking the chill of in the evenings. 

      EDIT:  I believe that “of” should be “off”.






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