79775EDIT / APPROVAL: OR- Montbell UL Inner Jacket - Nancy Griffith
- Nov 6, 2010Hi Nancy,
Nice Owner Review, your initial edits will follow. They will take the following
EDIT: must be changed
Edit: should be changed but will be left to your discretion
Comment: just that or something to think about
Once you have fixed them feel free to post your review here:
Just a reminder to delete your test HTML file.
Thanks for your contribution.
<<Manufacturer's Website: http://www.montbell.us
Comment: On the majority of your reports, this is a linkable hypertext
directly to the manufacturer. Did you miss building this link in your
<<The benefit is weight savings.
Comment: It may be beneficial to identify any drawbacks with the
construction such as it isn’t as warm as a baffled construction.
<<There is a montbell logo near the hem.
EDIT: “montbell” should be capitalized.
<<The jacket is great for taking the chill of in the evenings.
EDIT: I believe that “of” should be “off”.
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