78752EDIT: Owner Review - BearVault V500 - Michael Dax
- Feb 1 11:24 AMHi Michael,
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EDIT: must change
Edit: suggested change, it's up to you
Comment: something to think about
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EDIT: You need to convert measurements to metric units as well for our international readers. This is true throughout your report, with heights, weights, distances etc.
****Email Address: mjdax30@...
Edit: We recommend spelling this out because of spam. mjdax30 at whatever dot com
****The BearVault V500 is 700 cubic inches and roughly 13 inches
tall by 8 inches in diameter.
EDIT: You need conversions here. Also, are these your measurements? We like to have comparisons between the listed dimensions and your measured ones, as you did with the weight.
****did a day trip down the creek on our second
day.. Our elevation was between 7400 feet
and 2500. The terrain was rough, but
because of the dependable weather, our packs were light at around thirty
EDIT: Conversions to metric again. Also you have an extra period after 'second day'
****that it was safe from mice without having to take time consuming precautions or
****My friend and I both carried a BearVault V500 while my girlfriend
carried the Garcia canister).
EDIT: As you are reviewing the BearVault, it is policy not to compare with another brand by name. Something along the lines of 'while my girlfriend carried a different canister'.
****I do not think a single bear attempted to get into our canisters
EDIT: Need a period after canisters.
****It had a couple benefits it had over the Garcia
EDIT: As I mentioned above, it is better not to mention other brands by name. Something like 'It had a couple of benefits over other canisters on the market'
Finally, on a long trip like the JMT
Edit: You mention John Muir Trail earlier, but it is hard to put the two together. It would be better to either spell out the full name, or put JMT in parenthesis after the first mention.
****Bear canisters are a necessary evil. They are heavy and the take up a lot of
space, but when you need them, you need them.
EDIT: We require a summary section. You did a really nice summary, so just adding the subtitle 'Summary' to it would be fine. A list of likes and dislikes is also nice for people who are reading the report quickly, but we don't require it so it's up to you.
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