74289Edit/Approval: OR - Princeton Tec Attitude Flashlight - Sheila
- Sep 10, 2007Hi Sheila,
Thanks for the review, your edits will follow. You can put the
corrected version here:
I have to ask a weird question. Why does the name on the case
say "Altitude"? I know that they make an "Attitude" and I can find no
reference to a model named Altitude. Did you notice that?
***Listed Power: 12 lm
Comment: it may be more informative to spell out lumens as it is not
a common abbreviation
***The five-inch-long Attitude flashlight
EDIT: "five-inch long" and metric conversion please. I know it was in
the specs already but the rules say,
Rules for Measurements. (From the Survival Guide)
1. Including information in both Imperial and Metric units is
***The head of the flashlight twists clockwise to turn it on and
counter-clockwise to change the batteries.
Edit: does not turning it counter-clockwise turn it off, and when
taken further unscrew the head to allow access to the batteries?
***sometimes accidently tossing it onto rocks or into snow,
***A narrowly-focused light that would better illuminate a faraway
sign, but that would offer less peripheral vision.
Edit: this sentence does not make sense to me. It needs to be either
started or ended differently. Are you saying that "it also has a
narrowly focused light"?
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