66647Re: APPROVAL: Owner Review - REI Lightweight MTS Long Sleeve Crew - Phillip Engle
- May 31, 2005Roger -
Thanks for the pointer on my test document upload. I've corrected the edit
items you mentioned and took a stab at addressing your comment on the amount
of experience I've had with this item. I've uploaded the OR to the folder
Thanks for your help!
Date: Tue, 31 May 2005 16:58:18 +1000
From: "Roger Caffin" <r.caffin@...>
Subject: APPROVAL: Owner Review - REI Lightweight MTS Long Sleeve Crew -
Owner Review - REI Lightweight MTS Long Sleeve Crew - Phillip Engle
One small point: you put the html version in the Tests/Tests folder. That's
where we put test uploads of TEST reports. You should have put it in the
Test/OwnerReviews folder. No matter, I found it. That's OK.
We have some discretion here. I could ask you to fix the length of the bio
and 'good/well' and then repost on this channel, but how about I rely on you
to fix both of these before uploading to the correct folder? That will be in
> Backpacking Background: I've been backpacking since about 1975 (30 years).EDIT: still 123 words. The ruling is that it must be no longer than 100
words. Sorry about that.
> an anti-microbial finish that resists odor-causing bacteriaComment: I gather this does not work. :-) One could go to town here with
criticisms, but I think your paragraph later on is sufficient. A delicate
> After a year of use as a cold weather undershirt and 10Comment for the future: it is not entirely clear how long you have worn this
> days with a 35+ lb (16+ kg) pack, I see no signs of pilling.
> I have noticed a small amount of
> fraying on the shoulder seams that ride beneath the pack straps.
shirt actually backpacking. There has been some tightening of the rules over
this recently. I think the 10 days should be enough for this shirt, combined
with the length of time you have had it, but it might be a good idea to make
sure that items such as packs etc do get a slightly longer test period in
> especially for something that insulates this good.EDIT: do me a favour and change this from 'good' to 'well'. It fixes the
grammar, which I missed the first time around. (Good is an adjective,
whereas you need an adverb here.)
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