43844APPROVAL:Kelty Jet Stream Convertible Tent:JASON
- Jan 1, 2004Hi Jason, Well done. You've done a really fine job on the changes and it's
now a top class, well-rounded review. I'm really pleased you took the time
and trouble and I'm sure you've grasped our process well.
I have a couple of minor tweaks for you to attend to (below) and when you've
fixed these you can upload your review to:
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> Tester Bio### as you use abbreviations throughout the review, you should be consistent
> Name: Jason M. Dunster
> Age: 28
> Gender: Male
> Height: 5' 11" (1.8 m)
> Weight: 165 Pounds (75 kg)
here. The abbreviation we use for pound/pounds is lb
> Hardtop packed weight: 9 lbs. 2 oz. (4.1 kg.)### see note above re. abbreviations for pound/pounds = lb
> Soft top packed weight: 6 lbs. 13 oz. (3.1 kg.)
> head, perform typical tasks i.e. gear for next day, game of checkers,### just need to add the metric here (15 cm)
> or read. Long storage pockets are available at the top of the bathtub
> floor approximately 6 inches off the ground on the non-door sides of
> Summary### you need to delete '...an...'
> You really do get several tents from the Kelty Jet Stream
> Convertible. Ultimately because of this, it is an extremely good
> MSR Groundhog stakes. (Expensive but worth it if you have every### '...every...' should be '...ever...'
> turned a cheap tent stake into a makeshift corkscrew.)
Thanks again, and I look forward to reading further reviews from you,
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