Fic is 1600 words, and not really very graphic. It's not a happy fic,
but it isn't very disturbing, either. Kind of sad.
It's Ronon/OFC - but NOT a Mary Sue! At least I don't think so - these
things are why betas are good to have.
I have a feeling it could use some re-writing, but it's too fresh for
me to tell which bits and how. Also, English is not my first language,
so it probably needs a check.
Also, I'm wondering what kind of subtext a reader would get from this fic.
I can take all the constructive abuse you want to dish out.