Hello there! I'd be more than happy to read over it and give you a
second opinion! ^_~
Go ahead and send it on to Twilights_Bane@...
and I'll go over
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> The info on the story is:
> Title: After Class
> Rating: Will be NC17 in later chapters.
> Category: Slash
> Main Characters/Pairing: McShep
> Summary: The enigmatic Mr. Sheppard, whose mysterious nature draws
> music teacher Mr. McKay like a moth to a flame. Who wonders just
> skeletons are hiding in this new enigma's closet.
> Notes: I wanted to write a story which didn't involve any kind of
> Force/Scientist background for the guys but did involve the Math
> the Music side.
> Warnings: Nope.
> Spoilers: None.
> Archiving: Full Archiving
> Can someone help? I have done 7 chapters so far.