You send here now. I will read. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And I will run in the rain til I m breathless When I m breathless I run til I drop,Message 1 of 2 , Sep 23, 2010View SourceYou send here now. I will read.
And I will run in the rain 'til I'm breathless
When I'm breathless I run 'til I drop, hey
Thoughts of a fool, kind of careless
I'm just a fool waiting on the right block
- Led Zepplin, In Through the Out Door
From: karelia <ladyinthecloak@...>
Sent: Thu, September 23, 2010 10:57:28 PM
Subject: [yahoo: thepetulantpoetess] Alpha reader?
I recently started to write again and am getting to the stage of needing some feedback to see whether it's viable to continue and which direction to take, so if anyone is interested in reading a first draft of the first couple of chapters, I'll be forever grateful.
It's SS/HG, though it starts out as Hermione/Ron with a likable Ron. Neville is an important character, as is Draco. I figure it'll be about novella-length, perhaps slightly longer (70k? Maybe.). The entire plot revolves around a magical garden and a conspiracy.
I'm not looking for any expertise, though if you have it, great; all I need is someone with common sense who can see what doesn't work or does work.
If you're interested, let me know.
Every great advance in natural knowledge has involved the absolute rejection of authority. - Thomas H. Huxley