Well, I sent it two days ago, but I'm not sure if
you received it, so... here it goes again ^__^
Hi again!! Another chapter up, kinda soon ^__^. And I know,
its kinda huppy waffy fluffy ^^U
First of all, thank you very much for
the nice reviews!! I really wasnt expecting them, but
Im glad you liked my
story!! And also for the advice you gave me ^__^ Dont worry for all
questions you may have, theyll be answered in the right moment.
And as for
the grammar errors, please feel free to correct me when you see a mistake,
is not my first language, and I really want to improve
Well, enough said for now, lets go into
2: Some nice talks
That same evening, after flying to Okinawa and
taking a taxi to their final destination, the
four teenagers, with their
respective bags full of summer clothes, found themselves looking at
Manza Beach Hotel entrance.
Wow, Kudô!! You really did it this time!!
Said Heiji, eyes still looking at the nine-storie
building in front of
Kazuha was quite speechless. She expected no less from Kudô
Shinichi, but certainly not
that much! She would really enjoy this vacation,
she told to herself.
And they would have beeen looking at the building
for all the evening, hadnt Shinichi told them
to move on. Hey, do you want
to sleep outside or what? We have to check in, so lets have a look
hotel later. At that, they finally took their bags and went into the building,
about how the rooms would be like. Even Ran didnt know that, so she
only walked on beside Shinichi,
wanting to know what he had for
As soon as they got in, a nice receptionist, who smiled and gave
them a warm welcome, greeted them.
Good evening, and welcome to Manza
Beach Hotel! Did you make a reservation? She asked, permanent
on her face.
Good evening. Yes, I have two reservations for Kudô*
Shinichi told her.
Kudô? Sure. Just wait a minute, please She said
while typing at the reception computer. Here it
is. Rooms 923 and 925, am I
correct? She smiled at him, already knowing why he had explicitly
Shinichi smiled back at her. Thats it, thank you very
much. He picked up the cardkeys of the said
rooms, and turned to the
others. So, how about we go to the rooms and unpack? The bags feel quite
heavy, and I really am tired
Rans face saddened a little when he
said that. He really needs the rest now
At that moment,
to look at her, and seeing her face, tapped her head.
Smiling, he told
her Dont worry, Im fine. Its over now. At that, Ran could only smile back.
then, she could feel some uncomfortable glances at her. Knowing where
they came from (namely her dear
Osaka friends, who were now smiling evilly
to themselves), she picked up her bag. Ok, lets
you didnt tell me wed be staying in THESE rooms!!
was justified. Shinichi, being who he is, had to pick the hotel suites. They
nearly as big as her own house! Of course, Shinichi only put on his
already famous Shinichi Smile ®.
And what did you expect, a lousy
double room on the third floor? If I say vacation, its really
have a whole week for us in these rooms, and were going to enjoy
Oh, I suppose I cant complain then Ran said. And she turned to
Kazuha Ne, Kazuha-chan, lets go
unpack and put on our swimsuits! The
pbeach looks great from here, dont you think so?
Yeah, lets go!! Um,
see you in the pool, ok? Kazuha told Shinichi and Heiji. When the two girls
left to their room, Heiji couldnt wait anymore.
So, it finally
ended, didnt it?
finally Shinichi answered. And I still didnt
get to thank you and Tôyama. Really, I wouldnt
be alive if it werent for
At that, Heiji smiled. Come on, the Osaka branch of the
organisation wasnt that strong after all.
Once you finally took care of the
Tôkyô branch, it all came down quite easily
Well, as long as were
allright, I suppose I cant complain. He stopped for a second, his face turning
serious. Is Kazuha really ok?
Yeah, dont worry about her. It
seems Ran had told her about her suspicions, because when I told her
wasnt that surprised, and she really wanted to help. She understood why you had
to hide your true
identity, so shes not angry.
Im happy to hear
that. Shinichi smiled.
And, what about that Haibara girl? She didnt
want to come here with us? Heiji asked, curious about her.
said she would be busy these days, with the drug investigation still going on.
And she said
a little girl wouldnt fit with four teenagers
stayed small after all? He still asked, although he figured what the answer
Shinchi sadly smiled. Yeah. She said it would be her way of
paying for all the deaths she caused. I suppose
it really is the best for
If she says so
Heiji finally said, and began changing into his
swimsuit. Hey, wanna bet what the girls
will wear? I say brown bikini for
red and white for Ran!
Ha, you failed this time. Rans is
black and white
Heiji facefaulted at that. Oh? And how are you so sure
Mainly because its the one she put in her bag this
morning Shinichi grinned. A thud could be heard as
Heiji dropped his
I should have known. You finally did
Im so happy for you, Ran-chan!!!!!!!! Kazuhas cry could be head from the
third floor. She was really enjoying their talk, now.
The rest of the people here arent interested in our talk, you know? Ran was
at the glances she received from other tourists. Yes, were
together now. Enough?.
Of course, it WASNT enough for Kazuha. No way!
I want details. You already kissed?
It was certainly Rans Blushing Day.
And she blushed even more, which made Kazuha even more
this and that and
drowned when she finally realized what her friend was trying to say.
dont want to be in the same room? As the were heading to the beach, Heiji
asked for the
hundreth time, The Teasing Look not leaving his face. Shinichi
was kinda tired by then.
Well, you know Id love to, but I only asked
for two rooms, so you can guess who will have to sleep
Shinichi returned the teasing. As hoped, Heiji shut his mouth, and didnt open
they met the girls.
Heh!! I knew it, Brown
Of course you would know, wouldnt you? Now, he realized,
would be Shinichis turn to tease him to no end.
From the water, Ran
greeted them Hey, come here! The water is really nice!
You see? Black
and white bikini, I told you Shinichi told Heiji, with, you guessed, his
Smile ® Then he turned to Ran Hey, the water is really nice, you
Hm, you didnt believe me? Of course it is, water is warmer in the
evening She replied, without a
really angry face though. Until she was
Heiji and Kazuha could only sigh at the drowning game
the couple had begun to play.
Should we leave them
Ran managed to get her head out of the water No
*glub* a moment!! (Take glubs as Shinichi
making her drink some nice salty
We definitely should Kazuha finally said, letting out a
* Im sure this sentence is an
insult to English grammar, someone please tell me how it should be written
thats all for now (Im not home and have little time left, so Ill send this as
a chapter and maybe
make it a bit longer later ^__^). Hope you all liked
Of course, c&c appreciated ^__^ always trying to
And please, tell me of any grammar mistakes, Ill feel really
happy to correct them.