I’ve addressed the edits. The new version is uploaded and the old deleted.
Thank you for your time. This should be a good test and I am looking forward to it.
See you in two.
Sent: Friday, August 30, 2013 3:42 PM
Subject: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: IR - REI Half Dome 2 tent - Mike Mosack
Good job on this IR. REI makes pretty nice tents, I hope you enjoy testing this one.
Just a few edits for you. See you in a couple months.
***Listed Package Weight: 5 lb 10 oz (2.55 g)
***Measured Package Weight: 5.5 lb (2.5 kg)
Edit: as you are comparing the two numbers you should stick to one way of displaying them (lb/oz vs. fractional lb)
This is a three-season, two-person, single-wall, hexagon-shaped dome tent with a bathtub style floor, opposing/duel entry doors and the ability to set it up as a leightweight version
*** This tent sets up pretty much like most dome style tents do,
EDIT: you should phrase this to say; like most in your experience, or that you have owned, or such
***I'll have my 17 year old son with me to try it out .
EDIT: delete extra space before the period
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