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.... on my last hike I got it down to 17 lb.
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storms passed though so the trial was
**EDIT: severe ....trail (unless you happened to be hiking to court!)
Had just had my left knee scoped
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shadow my body created cause the area in front of me to be pretty dark.
knee was felling a lot better so I hiked down to the creek this time.
**EDIT my knee was feeling a lot...
sever thunderstorms cleared out a couple of hours before sundown.
**EDIT severe thunderstorms
started by leaving my stove and Ti Kettle at home, no hot chocolate on this
trip. I also changed my sleeping bag from The Exped DreamWalker Syn 133 L
to a much lighter down half bag and used a new down jacket I recently purchased
in place of the fleece jacket I had been using. I did not even pack a camera since
the camera on my iPhone has proven to be pretty good. I know this does not have
much to do with using the Energizer Carabiner LED Area Light but I did use it
several times to get up during the night.
**Edit: Consider leaving this part out since as you point out it doesn't have much to do with testing the LED light. Do however mention that you used it several times during the trip.
was cloudy the first several hours after dark but by 2 AM the skis...
have probably used the light for around 6 hours total so far, about 2/3rds of
the time divided evenly in either the high or low area light setting and the
other 1/3rd in the directional light setting. In other words, around 2
hours in each of the three light settings.
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have probably used the light for around 6 hours total so far, around 2
hours on each of the three light settings.
put of by the weight aspect.
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like that is uses LEDs
**EDIT: that it uses
I planed to do much night hiking
others eyse while sitting around chatting before truing in for the night.
**EDIT: each others eyes
Thank you and let me know if you have any questions.
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From: Coy Boy <starnescr@...
>; Kathy Waters <kathy@...
Sent: Tuesday, March 19, 2013 11:11 AM
Subject: LTR - Energizer Area Light - Coy Boy
Hello ladies, I finally got the LTR ready for edit. Kathy I included you as you granted me the extension and asked for notification when I had it ready. Not sure if you meant now or after it is uploaded in the proper folder. I can send you another message after I upload it. Just let me know.
Kara, thanks in advance for any edits or comments you may have. I know you have a week to edit the report but since I'm already late I'm hoping you find time to edit it soon. here is the link to the yahoo groups message board copy which includes a link to my test folder copy.
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