Sorry about the delay of game.
Nice report - good clear pictures. It's a little short, but with some good details.
On Jan 5, 2013, at 6:56 PM, Mark Thompson <markthompson242@...> wrote:
> Although not surprising, it was not compatible with stoves that are designed to fit a specific pot like those using heat exchangers.
Edit: As this sentence is written it seems to suggest on first read that "like those using heat exchangers" is a modifier of stoves, not the pot. Someone unfamiliar with where the heat exchanger is supposed to go may misread. I suggest a slight reword, perhaps "with stoves designed to work with pots featuring heat exchangers."
> however, the lid does not incorporate a camming feature on the lid handle which makes it difficult to remove the lid when the lid is hot or when wearing gloves.
Edit: I'm going to suggest here a little bit more just to make it really clear that the reason it's difficult to remove the lid is that the handle doesn't stay upright. Your call, though.
> The kettle did perform rather well with the ominous task of melting snow and then raising to a boil.
Question: Did you perhaps mean arduous? Ominous is "to give the impression something bad is about to happen."
Don't forget to delete the draft from the test folder - see you in a couple months.