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Gerber Instant Knife Monitor
You - SPECS
## Edit - Please add the metric conversions for all the mfg measurements and weights. Our friends outside the USA will probably find that helpful when comparing your findings with what was listed.
## Comment also you have the SPECS heading in bold but the rest of your headings aren't. Not sure if that was on purpose but thought I'd point it out.
You In INITIAL IMPRESSIONS and TRYING IT OUT
I The Gerber Instant seems like a solid general purpose knife
##Edit you have an extra "I" at the beginning of the this sentence
You - This methods also is easy.
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You - As it turns out, it sat underneath the hip pad of my backpack, although I didn't really notice it there, which I though was a good indication that the knife is quite compact.
You EXPECTATIONS for the Delta Series kitchen items:
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You - Compact knife fits easily in hand/li>
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You - This concludes my Iniital Report on the Gerber Instant Knife. Please check back in about 2 months for my Field Report on this Item.
Edit "Initial" and "item"