Bob Sanders <rscreative@...
> wrote on 10/02/2011 04:33:59 PM:
> Hi James,
> Here is my Initial Report for the ExOfficio Logic Jacket. My
> apologizies for being a couple days late.
> I have uploaded the HTML into the test folder and here is the link.
Hi Bob. Thank you for your ExOfficio Storm Jacket Initial Report. Sorry
to hear you are having troubles with the layout once the report is
uploaded. I think it actually looks really good, although there a font
issue described below. If you need help you can join the
BGTFileUploadHelp group and ask for help there.
You have a very well written report with excellent pictures. Please see
my edits below and adjust your report accordingly. Once you are satisfied
with the report, please upload it to the official folder. Please don't
forget to delete the copy in the test folder.
James E. Triplett
ExOfficio Storm Logic Jacket Monitor
[Edit] General comment. The font of your report starts out as Times New
Roman, until the "INITIAL IMPRESSIONS" section. There it changes to what
looks like Arial. Then the paragraphs that start "The jacket is primarily
marketed as a travel jacket" and "The other travel oriented feature of the
jacket is the integrated pillow" are back to Times New Roman, as well as
the "Presto, Chango - Travel Pillow" caption. After that it's back to
[EDIT] Your link tries to take me somewhere on the BGT site, not the
The shape shifting Storm Logic Jacket is made with a ripstop polyester
that's treated with DWR.
[Edit] You may want to spell out DWR the first time it is used. Direct
Web Remoting? Design Within Reach? Division of Water Resources? Oh
yeah, Durable Water Repellent.
100g of Primaloft in the chest and 60g in the arms
[EDIT] Even if this is from the website, you should still provide the
conversion to ounces.
Listed weight: NA
[Comment] Interesting. They list a weight for the women's, but not the
men's. I couldn't find it either.
Storm Logic Jacket <image>
[Edit] You may want to give credit to ExOfficio for the first jacket
The insulation is not overly thick and I estimate it to be 3/8 in (7 cm)
[EDIT] My conversion for 3/8 inch is .95 cm. (7 cm is 2 3/4 inches.)
Just feeling with my fingers I can not tell the difference between the
thickness of the insulation in the arms and chest.
[Edit] Cannot (one word).
Each specific pocket is labeled with an embroidered ikon of those items.
[EDIT] "ikon" should be "icon".
The pockets are well thought out but the embroidered ikons a bit overkill
in my opinion.
These patches are less grippy then standard hook and loop.
[EDIT] "then" should be "than".
Attaching the tabs makes a semi circle pillow.
[EDIT] "semi-circle" should have a hyphen.
Presto, Chango - Travel Pillow
[Comment] Exceptional picture!
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