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"In the long run I may just end up ramoving the strap..."
EDIT: This is actually in your IR. It looks like a typo slipped in when you were addressing my edits the last time around. Please replace "ramoving" with "removing."
"It was in 70s (21 C), with bluebird skies."
EDIT: Just to be sure there's no room for confusion, please add "F" after the Fahrenheit temperature here and after all Fahrenheit temperatures in your report.
"The second day we hiked to the Kualolo Lookout, across the cliff trail to another lookout , and back out to complete the loop."
EDIT: Please delete the space between "lookout" and the comma that follows it.
"...it stayed right on top of the water and it's light color was easy to spot..."
EDIT: Please replace "it's" with "its" (no apostrophe).
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