HTML looks good -- would have liked some photos, but they're not required. :)
Here are your edits:
"Tiger MMt.3,004 ft, 916m), Squak Mt. 2,024 ft, 617 m) and Cougar MtMt.1,595 ft, 486 m)."
EDIT: Tiger and Cougar I believe should both be "Mt.", not "MMt." and "MtMt." respectively.
"I actually found that I only had to stop and adjust the packs contents a couple of times during my trips, in order to rearrange the contents so that things weren't protruding into my back."
EDIT: "pack's contents" -- please add the possessive apostrophe.
"Two of my trips featured rain during this trips I was happy to see that I took a while for the pack to completely soak through."
EDIT: Please add a period between "rain" and "during". Change "this trips" to "these trips". And change "I" to "it" as in "happy to see that *it* took a while".
"Dislikes: The waistbelt conintually hitting my belly button rather than my waist."
EDIT: spelling -- "continually".
Please upload when done and delete your file from the TESTS folder. Thanks so much!