Sorry about the delay in the edits. BridGeT and I didn't communicate very well. Hope you had a nice Christmas holiday. Nice photographs. Just a couple of minor edits.
Edit: Where no MSRP is available on the web site, rather than leave it blank so it looks like you forgot to finish, I would suggest either reporting that Terramar doesn't have a suggested retail price on the web site or leave it off.
EDIT: Under Initial Impressions, first paragraph, "You can see..." Technically this is projecting which needs to be avoided. Maybe the reader can see and maybe he or she can't depending upon the viewer, etc. Better to say something like "As the first photographs shows...."
EDIT: Same comment as above for "You can't tell in the picture that I took that the fabric..."
EDIT: Please report on whether the item met your expectations based upon viewing the Terramar web site. (Chapter 5, IR paragraph 7.)
EDIT: Please add a line at the end which says something like, A report on my use of the top in the field will be appended to this report in two months (or the specific date if you know it)." (Chapter 5, IR paragraph 13.)
You know the drill from here. See you in a couple of months.
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