Thanks for your report. I have a couple of comments for your consideration:
(a) I haven't read the Initial or Field Reports, so this may have been
mentioned, but either way, I would still like a single summary sentence
given an indication of the numbers consumed. Also can you provide a bit more
details as the "field trips." As a reader I don't know what your "field
(b) My other comment is related to the bars themselves. Now I don't know
anything about these bars but I am assuming they are a energy bar of some
sort. Would that be correct? Assuming yes, I would like to see some comments
on their performance in this reqard. You seem to focus mainly on taste
whereas I would assume the bars are also a food source and a energy source.
Some comments from this perspective would be good as well please.
On 01/04/2008, S <geosheila@...> wrote:
> Hi Becki,
> Here's my LTR for the LARABAR Key Lime Pie & Pistachio bars. Thanks for
> your edits!
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