This is not an official Editor response. However ...
I have read through your OR, and would like to suggest that you get in
contact with the Mentor system here and ask for someone to work with you. As
it stands I do not think the OR is acceptable as it falls too far short on
information about the camera case itself. You do have lot's of information
about the weather and conditions of your bike riding, but the text tells me
almost nothing about the camera case itself. A Mentor can help you with