edited, uploaded, deleted
thanks for editing it
--- On Thu, 5/6/10, richardglyon <montana.angler@...> wrote:
From: richardglyon <montana.angler@...>
Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - Outdoor Research Seattle Sombrero - Jerry Adams
Date: Thursday, May 6, 2010, 8:21 AM
Jerry, here are your edits for the Sombrero, in standard BGT format: EDIT is a required change, Edit a suggested change or request for clarification, and Comment is a comment with no change required. After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl. com/29lsms2 Don't forget to delete your Tests/OR folder copy.
Congratulations on earning a Brownie Point! And thanks for the photos, which I think are really informative
<<Measured Weight: 3.4oz ( 96 g)>>
EDIT: Add a space after "3.4;" delete the space before "96."
<<I have a size L, color Khaki/Java.> >
Edit: Consider mentioning what other sizes and colors are available, and that sizing is unisex. Also consider including your hat size at the end of your Tester Information section.
<<The only problem I noticed, is that when it's hot, like over 70 F (21 C), I get sweaty around my forehead and around the sides and rear.>>
Comment: The breakpoint for me is 50 F (10C). After that I switch to a Nimbus Sombrero, sadly no longer offered.
<<OR has designed this as best possible, but it is definitely designed more for wet weather, rather than hot weather.>>
EDIT: as best as possible
<<The hat is a little shorter than some other hats I have used. >>
Edit: When I first read this I thought you meant short front to back. Meaning is clearer in context, but consider "shorter in the crown" for better readability.
<<but since it has 3 layers - outside fabric, Gore-Tex, inside fabric, it doesn't breath very well in hot weather.>>
EDIT: breathe very well
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