Chris, Well done. Here are your edits, same format as before. When you have revised, you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/y6jvn3c
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Edit: Consider writing out the punctuation to discourage spammers (AT, DOT, etc)
<<SLEEVE LENGTH 35 in (89 cm)
TORSO LENGTH 21 in (53cm)>>
Edit: Good for you for including, but these aren't really relevant for a watch review. Do include them if you're reviewing a shirt or jacket.
<<I would like it to be better but I think this is typical for this type of instrument.>>
Edit: "to do better" is more accurate
EDIT: A bit more serious: What's the basis for your comment about this being typical? Homework you did before buying this watch? You should indicate the basis for your opinion to avoid "projecting" - reporting what others think about the watch.
<<The biggest shortcoming of the watch is the ease with which it can get "bumped" out of chronometer mode. >>
Edit: Is it chronometer mode or chronograph mode? You use both terms above.