OK Steve, here are your edits. Same format as before: EDIT: required change, Edit a suggested change or request for clarification, and Comment a comment with no change required. After revising, repost as before, with a link to the html version in the Tests/Owner Review folder. I can't approve your report without viewing the html version. Cheers, Richard.
<<In 2008 I had my first taste of long-distance hiking when I set
out on the Appalachian Trail, completing 470 miles. >>
EDIT: Please add the metric conversion.
EDIT: Needs to be clickable
<<The bathtub floor reaches to a height of 8 inches (0.23 kg)
from the ground.>>
EDIT: Conversion is inaccurate should be 20 cm.
<<There are 2 mesh floor pockets on the inside of the tent, one
on either side, approximately 12 inches (0.30 m) from the tent door, for storing small items, as well as added gear loft loops on the tent's interior.>>
Edit: Single digits in text (as opposed to measurements) read better when spelled out ("two" instead of "2"). Here and elsewhere.
Edit: Consider changing "0.30 m" to "30 cm"
<<The separate Triangle Gear Loft is sold separately.>>
EDIT: Two "separates" are redundant; delete the first.
<<My latest trip using this tent consisted of a five week hike of the Appalachian Trail>>
Edit: five-week [with a hyphen]
<<The terrain in which this tent has been used varies from thick wooded forests to open fields and surrounding rocky areas, elevations ranging from 500 ft (152 m) above sea level to over 4000 feet (1219 m).>>
Edit: Unless you are measuring a precise item (height of a peak, weight of an item under review), round off the conversions. I'd do 150 m and 1200 m.
<<Take down is also quick and easy and once rolled up, fits comfortably in the tent bag. >>
EDIT: Faulty sentence structure here. Change to "once rolled up, the tent fits comfortably"
<<What I dislike: The only thing I can say that I dislike, though not with the tent itself; this applies to most tent manufacturers of today; is that the
footprint is separate.>>
EDIT: What you mean, I think, is that "the footprint is not included with the tent" or "the footprint is sold separately at additional cost."
<< again, does not detract from the quality & performance of the
product itself. Other than that, I'm sold on the Big Agnes Seedhouse 1. It's a
great product & I trust will bring me years of service.>>
EDIT: Replace the ampersands with "and"