Here are your edits for the Gossamer Gear Lightrek Poles. Mostly small
things; I think you can handle them on your own, though I'm glad to take
a gander at the final version if you'd like.
They follow the usual conventions for BGT edits:
EDIT: You must change this.
Edit: You should change this, or explain why not.
Comment: Just something to think about.
When you've made the edits, please upload your report to
and then delete your HTML from the test folder.
Thanks for your hard work!
> Note: Mine are an older version that were slightly heavier. They
> measured what
> was advertised for them.
Comment: I had to read the second sentence a few times before I got it.
If the poles measure what was advertised for them, why not just put 3.2
oz as their listed weight? You might add that later versions are
advertised as being lighter.
> Length Tested: 120 cm
> Sizes Available: From 105 to 135 cm (in 5 cm increments)
EDIT: Since Gossamer Gear does list length conversions, we need them
> [snipped multiple empty lines]
Edit: there are many extra spaces before the beginning of your Field Use
section. Is it possible to remove some of them?
> I purchased my poles in August 2007 and have used them for approximately
> miles of backpacking on 6 different trips for a total of 20 days. I also
EDIT: Please add a conversion for 135 miles.
> them for approximately 10 day hikes averaging 5 miles. I chose the
EDIT: Please add a conversion for 5 miles.
> for me was that they advertised that I could get a replacement pole for
> $30 USD
Edit: You abbreviate United States dollars as "USD" here, but "US" up in
your product information section. Could you choose one abbreviation and
use it on both prices?
> [trip report section snipped]
EDIT: Please spell out "National Park" and "California" instead of "NP"
and "CA" for the benefit of our international readers.
> trailhead in my car. I haven't transported them via airline only because
> afraid to lose them.
Edit: I might remove 'only' for clarity. Your call.
Nice review, Nancy! I'll catch you on the next one.