APPROVAL: La Sportiva Rajas Trail Runners - Gail Staisil
Actually, I am impressed. Your changes to the first half are excellent - so much so that I couldn't find a single thing
to correct. Comment: in my opinion, fwiiw, you have pitched this new first half exactly right for BGT.
There are two small edits for you to fix from the last round - both simple edit errors. After that, please upload when
> Manufacturer Weight: 1 lb 12 oz (0 .79 kg)
> Actual Weight: 1 lb 12.2 oz (0 .80 kg)
EDIT: take out the spaces after the zeroes. 0.79 kg, etc.
> I did a slip and fell once,
EDIT: er... what I meant was:
'I did slip and fall once '