Hi,



I'm looking for a beta for a story I've been working on. I do my own grammatical

editing so I really just need someone to bounce ideas off of and to give me

constructive criticism on characterization and the overall flow of where the

plot is going and how it's getting there.



Title: The Good Left Undone

Summary: What drives that strength of character? McKay didn't know either John

Sheppard well enough to fully understand. Add in a reporter, a desire for truth

and a taste of what "could be" & that unsigned non-disclosure agreement could be

a problem. Vegas-fic.



Note: While there is a female OC featured, along with Sheppard, as one of the

main characters, this is definitely a Gen (friendship I suppose) story and not a

romance. Two people thrown together by circumstance and forced to work together

essentially.



Story rating is R for language, upcoming violence and slightly more 'adult'

humor (you toss two adults together and you're probably going to get some

crass/innuendo humor).



There are 7 chapters already posted at Wraithbait

http://wraithbait.com/viewstory.php?sid=15810&index=1 if you would like to take

a gander at the story so far before deciding (and/or give some feedback on what

is already posted on here or by email - whichever).



I appreciate any help that can be given.



-Bridget (BLynn)