I'm looking for a beta for a story I've been working on. I do my own grammatical
editing so I really just need someone to bounce ideas off of and to give me
constructive criticism on characterization and the overall flow of where the
plot is going and how it's getting there.
Title: The Good Left Undone
Summary: What drives that strength of character? McKay didn't know either John
Sheppard well enough to fully understand. Add in a reporter, a desire for truth
and a taste of what "could be" & that unsigned non-disclosure agreement could be
a problem. Vegas-fic.
Note: While there is a female OC featured, along with Sheppard, as one of the
main characters, this is definitely a Gen (friendship I suppose) story and not a
romance. Two people thrown together by circumstance and forced to work together
Story rating is R for language, upcoming violence and slightly more 'adult'
humor (you toss two adults together and you're probably going to get some