Hi all. I'm new to the group and to SGA slash fiction and this is my
first attempt at it and would like someone to take a look and see if
the story works or doesn't and to make sure the characters are in
character. The goal is to make this the first in a series of fics that
traces John and Rodney's relationship through the seasons.

It's untitled so far and is NC-17/Adult/First-time and McShep. It
takes place immediately following the events in season one's "The
Eye". It's 53,000 words (about 130 pages).

Please feel free to contact me off-list if you'd be interested in
betaing. Thanks so much!
-puddle

I was on IMDB (not the best source, I know), looking at all the
recurring characters and I was wondering if we knew what had happened
to them or if they just hadn't been mentioned recently.

The ones I was wondering about are:-

Dr Biro
Sgt Markham (now, I'm pretty sure he was killed by that lone dart,
but I'm not positive and don't have my DVDs to hand)
Dr Lindsay Novak
Dr Coleman
Cpt Dave Kleinman
Dr Bill Leee
Sgt Stackhouse

And I think also

Parrish
Simpson
Miko (what is her surname - I can never remember)

The characters I'm most interested in are those who work with, or
for, McKay and any of the marines.

Naturally I'm ignoring people like Radek and Lorne, because we do see
them all the time.

And are there any other few time mentioned characters I haven't
mentioned (ones that are, you know, alive)?

This does all have a purpose since it's all for a fic I'm writing
although I am genuinely curious as well.

Thank you for you're time and help.

----- Original Message -----

From: ionaonie

To: wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com

Sent: Sunday, January 07, 2007 10:53 PM

Subject: [wraithbeta] Question about characters

I was on IMDB (not the best source, I know), looking at all the
recurring characters and I was wondering if we knew what had happened
to them or if they just hadn't been mentioned recently.

The ones I was wondering about are:-

Dr Biro
Sgt Markham (now, I'm pretty sure he was killed by that lone dart,
but I'm not positive and don't have my DVDs to hand)
Dr Lindsay Novak
Dr Coleman
Cpt Dave Kleinman
Dr Bill Leee
Sgt Stackhouse

And I think also

Parrish
Simpson
Miko (what is her surname - I can never remember)

The characters I'm most interested in are those who work with, or
for, McKay and any of the marines.

Naturally I'm ignoring people like Radek and Lorne, because we do see
them all the time.

And are there any other few time mentioned characters I haven't
mentioned (ones that are, you know, alive)?

This does all have a purpose since it's all for a fic I'm writing
although I am genuinely curious as well.

Thank you for you're time and help.

On 1/7/07, ionaonie <Iona_Onie@...> wrote:
>  Dr Biro

Dr Biro was the pathologist seen in Hot Zone.  I'm not sure if we've
seen her since but as far as I know she's still around, although it's
possible she's returned to Earth.

>  Sgt Markham (now, I'm pretty sure he was killed by that lone dart,

Dead.  He was killed in The Brotherhood in Season 1 and you're right,
it was by a Wraith dart.

>  Dr Lindsay Novak

Still on the Daedalus as far as we know.  Nothing in canon to the contrary.

>  Dr Bill Leee

As far as Atlantis goes, I think he was seen in The Return Pt 1 as the
person Elizabeth has to flirt with so that Rodney can access the
database and give himself access rights, although this appearance
isn't listed in the database on Gateworld.  He's on Earth and pops up
in SG-1 every now and again.

>  Sgt Stackhouse

As far as we know alive but not been seen since Season 1, so it's
possible he's returned to Earth.

>  Parrish

Only ever seen in one episode (Runner, in Season 2), for two minutes.
No information about him since then.

>  Simpson

Not seen since Season 1, but no evidence that she's dead.

>  Miko (what is her surname - I can never remember)

There's some fannish theories that she's actually the 'Dr Kusanagi'
who McKay refers to having the gene.  Don't think she's been seen on
screen since Letters From Pegasus.

>  The characters I'm most interested in are those who work with, or
>  for, McKay and any of the marines.

A good place to find out about characters is the Gateworld Omnipedia:

http://www.gateworld.net/omnipedia/characters/index.shtml


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Stackhouse is definitely alive. He wasn't killed by the dart.
Novak works on the Daedalus so she's out and about most of the time.
Dr. Bill Lee is stationed at the SGC. He repeatedly shows up on SG1.
Dr. Biro, I'm not sure about. The last time I saw her was in Hot
Zone.
I'm fairly certain that Parrish and Simpson are still alive, but
since they're in the soft sciences, they aren't mentioned as much.
Miko who's surname I believe is Kusangi, I think is still around.
Not sure.


Hope this helps.
















--- In wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com, "ionaonie" <Iona_Onie@...> wrote:
>
> I was on IMDB (not the best source, I know), looking at all the
> recurring characters and I was wondering if we knew what had
happened
> to them or if they just hadn't been mentioned recently.
>
> The ones I was wondering about are:-
>
> Dr Biro
> Sgt Markham (now, I'm pretty sure he was killed by that lone dart,
> but I'm not positive and don't have my DVDs to hand)
> Dr Lindsay Novak
> Dr Coleman
> Cpt Dave Kleinman
> Dr Bill Leee
> Sgt Stackhouse
>
> And I think also
>
> Parrish
> Simpson
> Miko (what is her surname - I can never remember)
>
> The characters I'm most interested in are those who work with, or
> for, McKay and any of the marines.
>
> Naturally I'm ignoring people like Radek and Lorne, because we do
see
> them all the time.
>
> And are there any other few time mentioned characters I haven't
> mentioned (ones that are, you know, alive)?
>
> This does all have a purpose since it's all for a fic I'm writing
> although I am genuinely curious as well.
>
> Thank you for you're time and help.
>

Hiya, I'm Hannah and I'm willing to beta for you. If you send it to
my email: blue_mystery@..., then I will be very happy to
look it over for you.

--- In wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com, ShaMak <shamakff@...> wrote:
>
> Hey people!
>
> If someone is willing, I would like some help with a fic I've been
working on. To be blunt, I need someone to tell me if it's any good
or not -- and therefore, if I should continue to write it or not.
Right now, the story is about 3600 words, with a prologue and the
first chapter. Obviously, it is a WIP and I have no idea when I'm
going to be able to finish. Of course, if you can also check grammar
mistakes and such, I'll be very grateful.
>
> The rating of the story is currently FRT/PG-13. It will be slash
eventually (though I'd say that the written parts are very much gen),
and it is centered around an OMC.
>
> On a final note; please, I need someone that will really tell me if
it is worth to continue the story or not. So, if it isn't good, I
want someone who can thrash it. Really.
>
> Thanks,
> ShaMak
>
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If anyone has any time, they're both Crossovers, one with the Unit and
one with Supernatural.

I'd had them looked over at one point but I cannot for the life of me
find the corrected versions.

Any help would be appreciated.

-Kris

Hi, I'm Hannah and I'd be more than happy to look over your stories
for them. Feel free to send them to my email address
blue_mystery@... and I'll see what I can do.




--- In wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com, "Kris" <angel_phobia@...> wrote:
>
> If anyone has any time, they're both Crossovers, one with the Unit
and
> one with Supernatural.
>
> I'd had them looked over at one point but I cannot for the life of me
> find the corrected versions.
>
> Any help would be appreciated.
>
> -Kris
>

hi, all.
I am rewriting the story "Atlantis song", the story is Rodney
centric and has been previously posted on wraithbait,
I am looking for beta to help me with this short story.
It deals with Rodney's suicide so it is rated PG13.
Eventa are set mainly after the events of "Trinity"
Would somebody help me?

p.s
I am a POLISH girl and English is not my native language and I am
also Dyslectic. (it is just to warn you what you will be getting
yourself  in to)

that was supposed to go directly to Hannah

Here are the files, thanks again for the help!

--- jacks_chicita <blue_mystery@...> wrote:

> Hi, I'm Hannah and I'd be more than happy to look
> over your stories
> for them. Feel free to send them to my email address
>
> blue_mystery@... and I'll see what I can
> do.
>
>
>
>
> --- In wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com, "Kris"
> <angel_phobia@...> wrote:
> >
> > If anyone has any time, they're both Crossovers,
> one with the Unit
> and
> > one with Supernatural.
> >
> > I'd had them looked over at one point but I cannot
> for the life of me
> > find the corrected versions.
> >
> > Any help would be appreciated.
> >
> > -Kris
> >
>
>
>



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Hi,

anyone up for a quick beta? 1000 words, McShep smut. I need someone to
check out the punctuation and look for other odd mistakes. Shouldn't
take much of your time. Tiny spoiler for episode 312 Echoes.

E-mail at ulthyrja@....

Thank you!

U.

Hi, I'd be more than willing to take a look at it. Just send it to my
email account. blue_mystery@...

I'll try and have it back to you on the same day.

--- In wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com, "jacks_chicita" <blue_mystery@...>
wrote:
>
> Hi, I'd be more than willing to take a look at it. Just send it to my
> email account. blue_mystery@...
>
> I'll try and have it back to you on the same day.
>

Okay, your email isn't working, what's the ending? Is it yahoo dot
com, yahoo dot uk dot co or what? Tried to email you but it bounced
back the message.

Ulthyrja

It's blue_mystery@.... It's the one I use the most. Try and
send it again

I was hoping that with the size of the group and the relative
inactivity (as mails are limited to requests and responses :)), we'd
escape the spammers' notice.

However, twas not to be, unfortunately.

I've removed the spammer from the group, deleted the message and have
set it so that all new members are moderated - i.e. all messages from
them need to be approved by me before they are sent to the group.

This won't affect current members, but it will mean that in future,
when someone joins I won't actually set their status to unmoderated
until they've posted an on topic post and proved that they aren't a
spammer.

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I have what promises to be a pretty long McShepp fic. It's totally AU
and a definite work in progress. "G" rated at the stage I'm at and
won't probably go much further than maybe a soft "R", so it's
relatively tame. I've beta'd for others and am a pretty decent writer
on my own, but (a) could use a second pair of eyes on the fic and (b)
am looking for someone to push me to be better.

I'm very good at editing (grammar, punctuation, etc.) and finding
holes... really interested in either trading or someone who wants to
beta this on and off for me since I have a couple other major works in
progress that I'm rotating between. So willing to trade or looking for
someone who just wants to beta.....

If you want to see some of my other work, willing to share before you
decide to commit. Send an email on or off the list if you're interested.

Thanks!

--MJ

Heya! I'm also looking for a beta at the moment for a Unit/Atlantis
fic. One of the girls I beta'd inspired me to write it. It's a Bob
Brown/OFC romance pairing.

Let me know if you can check it over. It's roughly Pg-13/R at the
moment and I'm stucker than heck on what to write next.

So? anybody interested? I've already two chapters written, with another
one on the way, and need someone who's good a spotting typos, and may
be able to give me some input into characterisation, as this is the
first time I've written in this fandom.

...let me know if you're interested :-)

--- In wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com, "Jinxed" <jinxed_wood@...> wrote:
>
> So? anybody interested? I've already two chapters written, with
another
> one on the way, and need someone who's good a spotting typos, and may
> be able to give me some input into characterisation, as this is the
> first time I've written in this fandom.
>
> ...let me know if you're interested :-)
>


What is it rated?  If it's not NC-17, then I'd be happy to beta.  My e-
mail address is alterangirl@...

Hi, I need a little help for my story
I need to know how an impaled victim who is pinned to the floor be
treated who is suffering from Hypovolaemic shock.
Specifically what should be done about the wound (the victim cannot be
moved and must remain conscious [at least some of the time])

>Subject: [wraithbeta] First Aid
>Date: Mon, 05 Feb 2007 20:26:41 -0000
>
>Hi, I need a little help for my story
>I need to know how an impaled victim who is pinned to the floor be
>treated who is suffering from Hypovolaemic shock.

I would suggest joining fanfic_med@yahoogroups.com (they've covered injuries
like that, in the past)

>Specifically what should be done about the wound (the victim cannot be
>moved and must remain conscious [at least some of the time])
>
>

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I'm trying out the idea of mixing and matching SG1 and SGA characters
and putting them in a 'verse where they are members of two separate
SWAT teams. Unfortunately, I've never written a Stargate Atlantis
story in a completely different 'verse. Can anyone offer some advice?

Morning *waves*

I have a short fluff piece--*hopefully* a humorous Rodney/Ronon piece
that stands under a 850 word count. A quick turn around would be a
plus.

Anyhoo, I'm looking for a hard-nosed editor. Also possibly someone
who might be interested in future fics with various pairings. I
mainly write slash with: Lorne, Sheppard, Rodney, Ronon, Carson in
various combinations including threesomes--would be great!

Someone who can handle my weaknesses: Over use of commas/hyphens,
verse tense problems, word choices, repetitive use of some words—
along with standard spelling, grammar, & sentence structure.

For either please reply off list at: denyce36(at)yahoo(dot)com
Just mention if it's just for the R/R one shot, and, or if you're
interested in beta'n my other projects...thanks!!

D~

This is on the Episode THE RETURN 1.
Maybe I just didn´t pay attention, but I need this information for a
ficlet of mine.
Were the Atlanteans killed by the Asurans, or did they ascend?
Yours GB