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#384 From: "Jill" <alterangirl@...>
Date: Sun Oct 29, 2006 5:17 pm
Subject: Re: looking for beta of McKay/Novak fic
alterangirl
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wrote:
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> Hi I'm looking for a beta of a McKay/Novak fiction it is a wip and I'm
not sure how many chapters there is going to be. I'm a terrible speller
and would realy appreciate any help I could get.
>
> Thanks
>
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Of course I'll help!  In my not-so-humble opinion, I'm an excellent
speller.  Don't worry about WIP's; I've got one in the works myself.
Just send it to alterangirl@...

#385 From: "moonshadegoldgirl" <moonshadegoldgirl@...>
Date: Wed Nov 1, 2006 1:28 am
Subject: Beta for Bound To Happen
moonshadegol...
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After being pestered I finally gave in. This is what I need. Basically
it's 21 chapters but I won't send all the chapters at once. I just
need any spelling errors corrected and sentence structure checked. If
there's anything that seems missing like a word or a word needs to be
removed that is also useful. Thank you!

LV

#386 From: angela paterson <angela8750@...>
Date: Wed Nov 1, 2006 7:28 pm
Subject: Beta needed
angela8750
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Hi. I've just taken on an absolutely huge challenge, and signed up for the NaNoWriMo challenge. I've just started writing my first ever novel, which will be a SGA story. It's a team story, which will probably, eventually involve most of the characters in Atlantis. I've just got the first chapter done, and it comes in at 4083 words. I'm aiming for the 50,000 words by the end of the month, but hope to post the novel as I go along. So I'm looking for someone that can primarily check it over for any spelling mistakes, and punctuation. I'm not bad but im not perfect either.
 
Any help anyone can give me would be greatly appreciated.
 
Angela (aka ShepsAngel

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#387 From: "Larkin" <groups@...>
Date: Wed Nov 1, 2006 8:03 pm
Subject: RE: Beta needed
theaquariado...
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Can you give me some details about the story, pairing? Raiting etc?

thanks

 


From: wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com [mailto:wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of angela paterson
Sent: 01 November 2006 19:29
To: wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com
Subject: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

 

Hi. I've just taken on an absolutely huge challenge, and signed up for the NaNoWriMo challenge. I've just started writing my first ever novel, which will be a SGA story. It's a team story, which will probably, eventually involve most of the characters in Atlantis. I've just got the first chapter done, and it comes in at 4083 words. I'm aiming for the 50,000 words by the end of the month, but hope to post the novel as I go along. So I'm looking for someone that can primarily check it over for any spelling mistakes, and punctuation. I'm not bad but im not perfect either.

 

Any help anyone can give me would be greatly appreciated.

 

Angela (aka ShepsAngel


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#388 From: angela paterson <angela8750@...>
Date: Wed Nov 1, 2006 10:17 pm
Subject: Re: Beta needed
angela8750
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Hi. Yeah. There is no pairing, it will be a team fic, although it will be mostly focused on Rodney and Sheppard. It has a K rating. Sheppard and Rodney are captured off world, and are implanted with devices which mean that they can't sleep. I was doing some research, and found out that the longest anyones ever stayed away is 11 days. So the reason for the devices is to basically push them to their limits to get information out of them. However they're going to be rescued after a couple of days on the planet, and taken back to Atlantis, where Beckett discovers that he can't remove the devices. And they're basically going to go through all of the different symptoms of severe sleep deprivation such as hallucinations, and paranoia, etc.
 


 
----- Original Message ----
From: Larkin <groups@...>
To: wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Wednesday, 1 November, 2006 8:03:03 PM
Subject: RE: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

Can you give me some details about the story, pairing? Raiting etc?

thanks

 


From: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com [mailto:wraithbeta@ yahoogroups. com] On Behalf Of angela paterson
Sent: 01 November 2006 19:29
To: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com
Subject: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

 

Hi. I've just taken on an absolutely huge challenge, and signed up for the NaNoWriMo challenge. I've just started writing my first ever novel, which will be a SGA story. It's a team story, which will probably, eventually involve most of the characters in Atlantis. I've just got the first chapter done, and it comes in at 4083 words. I'm aiming for the 50,000 words by the end of the month, but hope to post the novel as I go along. So I'm looking for someone that can primarily check it over for any spelling mistakes, and punctuation. I'm not bad but im not perfect either.

 

Any help anyone can give me would be greatly appreciated.

 

Angela (aka ShepsAngel


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#389 From: "Larkin" <groups@...>
Date: Thu Nov 2, 2006 6:24 pm
Subject: RE: Beta needed
theaquariado...
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I’m not brilliant, but if no one else offers to take it on, I wouldn’t mind giving you a hand, I can at least pick up most mistakes J

Just let me know

Larkin

 


From: wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com [mailto:wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of angela paterson
Sent: 01 November 2006 22:18
To: wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com
Subject: Re: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

 

Hi. Yeah. There is no pairing, it will be a team fic, although it will be mostly focused on Rodney and Sheppard. It has a K rating. Sheppard and Rodney are captured off world, and are implanted with devices which mean that they can't sleep. I was doing some research, and found out that the longest anyones ever stayed away is 11 days. So the reason for the devices is to basically push them to their limits to get information out of them. However they're going to be rescued after a couple of days on the planet, and taken back to Atlantis, where Beckett discovers that he can't remove the devices. And they're basically going to go through all of the different symptoms of severe sleep deprivation such as hallucinations, and paranoia, etc.

 



 

----- Original Message ----
From: Larkin <groups@amuseingwriters.co.uk>
To: wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Wednesday, 1 November, 2006 8:03:03 PM
Subject: RE: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

Can you give me some details about the story, pairing? Raiting etc?

thanks

 


From: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com [mailto:wraithbeta@ yahoogroups. com] On Behalf Of angela paterson
Sent: 01 November 2006 19:29
To: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com
Subject: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

 

Hi. I've just taken on an absolutely huge challenge, and signed up for the NaNoWriMo challenge. I've just started writing my first ever novel, which will be a SGA story. It's a team story, which will probably, eventually involve most of the characters in Atlantis. I've just got the first chapter done, and it comes in at 4083 words. I'm aiming for the 50,000 words by the end of the month, but hope to post the novel as I go along. So I'm looking for someone that can primarily check it over for any spelling mistakes, and punctuation. I'm not bad but im not perfect either.

 

Any help anyone can give me would be greatly appreciated.

 

Angela (aka ShepsAngel


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#390 From: "darkwolf06660" <dark_wolf666@...>
Date: Fri Nov 3, 2006 4:46 am
Subject: Still looking for a Beta.
darkwolf06660
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If anyone is willing, please help me out. I have a multichapter story
that I would like some help with puntuation and grammer. It is a
Beckett/Zelenka fic and will be PG-13 at the most. It is an
established relationship fic. I have the first chapter completed and
the second one is on its way.

So again, help would be greatly appreciated.

#391 From: angela paterson <angela8750@...>
Date: Fri Nov 3, 2006 2:15 pm
Subject: Re: Beta needed
angela8750
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Hey Larkin.
 
I haven't had any other offers of a beta, so if you are still willing to give me a hand it would be very much appreciated.
 
Thanks
 
Angela

----- Original Message ----
From: Larkin <groups@...>
To: wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Thursday, 2 November, 2006 6:24:38 PM
Subject: RE: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

I¢m not brilliant, but if no one else offers to take it on, I wouldn¢t mind giving you a hand, I can at least pick up most mistakes J

Just let me know

Larkin

 


From: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com [mailto: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com ] On Behalf Of angela paterson
Sent: 01 November 2006 22:18
To: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com
Subject: Re: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

 

Hi. Yeah. There is no pairing, it will be a team fic, although it will be mostly focused on Rodney and Sheppard. It has a K rating. Sheppard and Rodney are captured off world, and are implanted with devices which mean that they can't sleep. I was doing some research, and found out that the longest anyones ever stayed away is 11 days. So the reason for the devices is to basically push them to their limits to get information out of them. However they're going to be rescued after a couple of days on the planet, and taken back to Atlantis, where Beckett discovers that he can't remove the devices. And they're basically going to go through all of the different symptoms of severe sleep deprivation such as hallucinations, and paranoia, etc.

 



 

----- Original Message ----
From: Larkin <groups@amuseingwrit ers.co.uk>
To: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com
Sent: Wednesday, 1 November, 2006 8:03:03 PM
Subject: RE: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

Can you give me some details about the story, pairing? Raiting etc?

thanks

 


From: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com [mailto:wraithbeta@ yahoogroups. com] On Behalf Of angela paterson
Sent: 01 November 2006 19:29
To: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com
Subject: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

 

Hi. I've just taken on an absolutely huge challenge, and signed up for the NaNoWriMo challenge. I've just started writing my first ever novel, which will be a SGA story. It's a team story, which will probably, eventually involve most of the characters in Atlantis. I've just got the first chapter done, and it comes in at 4083 words. I'm aiming for the 50,000 words by the end of the month, but hope to post the novel as I go along. So I'm looking for someone that can primarily check it over for any spelling mistakes, and punctuation. I'm not bad but im not perfect either.

 

Any help anyone can give me would be greatly appreciated.

 

Angela (aka ShepsAngel


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#392 From: "Larkin" <groups@...>
Date: Fri Nov 3, 2006 2:29 pm
Subject: RE: Beta needed
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Yeah, no problem J

 


From: wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com [mailto:wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of angela paterson
Sent: 03 November 2006 14:15
To: wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com
Subject: Re: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

 

Hey Larkin.

 

I haven't had any other offers of a beta, so if you are still willing to give me a hand it would be very much appreciated.

 

Thanks

 

Angela

----- Original Message ----
From: Larkin <groups@amuseingwriters.co.uk>
To: wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Thursday, 2 November, 2006 6:24:38 PM
Subject: RE: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

I¢m not brilliant, but if no one else offers to take it on, I wouldn¢t mind giving you a hand, I can at least pick up most mistakes J

Just let me know

Larkin

 


From: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com [mailto: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com ] On Behalf Of angela paterson
Sent: 01 November 2006 22:18
To: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com
Subject: Re: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

 

Hi. Yeah. There is no pairing, it will be a team fic, although it will be mostly focused on Rodney and Sheppard. It has a K rating. Sheppard and Rodney are captured off world, and are implanted with devices which mean that they can't sleep. I was doing some research, and found out that the longest anyones ever stayed away is 11 days. So the reason for the devices is to basically push them to their limits to get information out of them. However they're going to be rescued after a couple of days on the planet, and taken back to Atlantis, where Beckett discovers that he can't remove the devices. And they're basically going to go through all of the different symptoms of severe sleep deprivation such as hallucinations, and paranoia, etc.

 



 

----- Original Message ----
From: Larkin <groups@amuseingwrit ers.co.uk>
To: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com
Sent: Wednesday, 1 November, 2006 8:03:03 PM
Subject: RE: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

Can you give me some details about the story, pairing? Raiting etc?

thanks

 


From: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com [mailto:wraithbeta@ yahoogroups. com] On Behalf Of angela paterson
Sent: 01 November 2006 19:29
To: wraithbeta@yahoogro ups.com
Subject: [wraithbeta] Beta needed

 

Hi. I've just taken on an absolutely huge challenge, and signed up for the NaNoWriMo challenge. I've just started writing my first ever novel, which will be a SGA story. It's a team story, which will probably, eventually involve most of the characters in Atlantis. I've just got the first chapter done, and it comes in at 4083 words. I'm aiming for the 50,000 words by the end of the month, but hope to post the novel as I go along. So I'm looking for someone that can primarily check it over for any spelling mistakes, and punctuation. I'm not bad but im not perfect either.

 

Any help anyone can give me would be greatly appreciated.

 

Angela (aka ShepsAngel


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#393 From: "suicidallemoneater" <suicidallemoneater@...>
Date: Sat Nov 4, 2006 12:53 am
Subject: Re: In need of Beta for four stories
suicidallemo...
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I'm kind of new on this scene, but I'm an old hat at beta reading if
you'd like to send your stuff to me. I'm not really sure how exactly
this works; if you e-mail me or whatever, but let me know, and I'd
like to check out your stories.

--- In wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com, "cranberrytylenol"
<cranberrytylenol@...> wrote:
>
> I'm looking for a beta-reader to check grammar and give critisim on
> quite a few stories. One Beta need not do all the stories. I need an
> un-biased opinion of my writing as well, to know if I should tackle
> larger projects.
>
> Expectations- McKay/Sheppard
> Rating is around... a PG13 or much less.
> Word count is 1198
> Decription: Reflections on Expectational Game Theory and Rodney's
> relationship with John.
>
> I'll See Your Heart- McKay/Sheppard
> Songfic/PwP/Rambling
> Rating is PG13
> Word count is 541
> Description: Highly Visual look of a poker game. Inspired by McShep
> vid found on YouTube, loosely.
>
> Oh, Lately It's So Quiet- McKay/Sheppard
> Rating is R- might be NC17. Need help deciding.
> Word count is 2253
> Description: John reflects on the ghosts that follow him ever since
> the dissapearance of a certain snarky astrophysicist. Inspired by
the
> OK GO song of the same title.
>
> Sleep- McKay/Sheppard
> Drabble
> Rating is Gen
> Word count is 361
> Description: Rodney thinks he left something in the shower.
>

#394 From: "moonshadegoldgirl" <moonshadegoldgirl@...>
Date: Sat Nov 4, 2006 8:17 pm
Subject: Beta for a short one page fic
moonshadegol...
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In addition to my bound to happen fic I could really use a beta for a
short humorous like 3 page fic. I just needed spelling errors
corrected that's it.

LV

#395 From: "with_an_apostrophe" <with_an_apostrophe@...>
Date: Sun Nov 12, 2006 9:08 am
Subject: Beta needed (urgently) for gen AU crackfic
with_an_apos...
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Hi there!

I'm writing two linked gen AU crackfics for the current flash_fic
challenge and therefore need a beta in a hurry as my current beta is
not responding.

I would prefer an American, because I'm British and I need help
with 'things that John Sheppard would definitely not say'!
(like 'whilst' and 'nor' and 'rota' instead of 'rosta'.)

Challenge is due by the end of the week. It's not overly long, but
longer than the average flashfic!

*hopes*

#396 From: "with_an_apostrophe" <with_an_apostrophe@...>
Date: Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:01 am
Subject: Re: Beta for a short one page fic
with_an_apos...
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Sure send it my way! I have a super-speedy turn aroud and I love
humor/humour! Don't worry I'll stick to US spelling!

--- In wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com, "moonshadegoldgirl"
<moonshadegoldgirl@...> wrote:
>
> In addition to my bound to happen fic I could really use a beta for
a
> short humorous like 3 page fic. I just needed spelling errors
> corrected that's it.
>
> LV
>

#397 From: "mysticmcknight" <mysticmcknight@...>
Date: Mon Nov 13, 2006 6:41 am
Subject: Beta needed for McShep NC-17
mysticmcknight
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The story is a totaly Alternate universe and I need a beta to help do
an alpha on the spelling and gramar kinks. The story is nc-17 due to
language and one sexual scene. A little knowledge of hockey would help
as both guys are professional hockey players in this AU. :>) It's
approximately 30 pages at 12pt.

If interested please email me at mysticmcknight@...

#398 From: "mysticmcknight" <mysticmcknight@...>
Date: Mon Nov 13, 2006 6:46 am
Subject: Beta needed for R McShep fic
mysticmcknight
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This is an AU breaking away in second season but does contian spoilors
for certain third season episodes, such as McKay and Mrs. Miller.R
rating is for language, suggestive sexual scene and story leength is
approx 80 pages at 12pt.

Need an alpha to pick out spelling and grammer mistakes. Suggestion on
chapter breaks also welcomed.

If interested please email me at mysticmckight and let me know it's
the R story you're interested in as I finished a short Nc-17. Thanks.
Mystic

#399 From: Kat Ellis <zzkat_ellis@...>
Date: Wed Nov 15, 2006 6:00 pm
Subject: Beta needed - SGA team fic
zzkat_ellis
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Hello,
I have "lost" my usual beta - all mails are being bounced back (but if you get this Penny please let me know and I will try again) - so I am out here looking for a beta reader.
My story (Calypso) is a team fic with a focus on McKay and Sheppard.  Parts 1 to 5 are already published on wraithbait / jumper bay and fan fic.  I'm looking for a beta who will keep an eye on the flow of the story, correct any overly English-sounding dialogue and help me stay in character.  Part 6 is ready for beta-ing and there should be 3 or 4 more parts.  Any offers?
Thanks,
Kat. 
 
 


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#400 From: "Anne" <bookmangal@...>
Date: Sat Nov 18, 2006 7:55 am
Subject: Beta needed for a Rodney/Daniel NC-17 story
bookmangal
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Hi, I'm looking for a beta reader for my McKay/Jackson fic. Adult
rated. I mostly need someone that can do the
grammar/spelling/punctuation checks. hope to hear from you guys :)

Anne

#401 From: "valleya2000" <valleya2000@...>
Date: Sat Nov 18, 2006 8:52 pm
Subject: I'm looking for a beta for an adventure story, Shep whumping etc
valleya2000
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Hi, I'm writing my first sga story after years of writing in other
fandoms.  I need someone who is sga-saavy to help me with details and
also continuity.  (Of course, grammar, etc, is always appreciated <G>)

I started posting it on fanfiction.net in October before I realized it
was going to be a much longer story (4 chapters posted, and it will
probably be 20 chapters when done) So if you want to get an idea of
what the story will be like, you can look there.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3206984/1/

Thanks in advance!

Val

ps--I just discovered wraithbait, so I will post the story there also
once it's done.  Thanks again!

#402 From: "admiralartemis" <artemis40000@...>
Date: Sun Nov 19, 2006 9:04 pm
Subject: Beta Request, 1st Chapter
admiralartemis
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Beta requested for first chapter (7 in total) of General SGA fic, minor
Shep whumping.
Not an awful lot of work needed done, mainly just a couple of
Grammatical errors
Oh, almost forgot, it's called: Ancient Memories

Admiral

#403 From: ShaMak <shamakff@...>
Date: Sun Nov 19, 2006 9:18 pm
Subject: Re: Beta needed for a Rodney/Daniel NC-17 story
shamakff
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Hey, Anne!
If you are willing to wait until the first week of December, I can give it a shot!
 
ShaMak
----- Original Message ----
From: Anne <bookmangal@...>
To: wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Saturday, November 18, 2006 4:55:28 AM
Subject: [wraithbeta] Beta needed for a Rodney/Daniel NC-17 story

Hi, I'm looking for a beta reader for my McKay/Jackson fic. Adult
rated. I mostly need someone that can do the
grammar/spelling/ punctuation checks. hope to hear from you guys :)

Anne




#404 From: <girlgonemadd@...>
Date: Mon Nov 20, 2006 4:08 am
Subject: Beta wanted, McKay POV, pg-13
girlgonemadd001
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Need a beta to look over grammer, punctuation and story flow for a short story
that's a McKay POV on the last season episode The Return 1.

--Terri

#405 From: Anne <bookmangal@...>
Date: Mon Nov 20, 2006 6:53 am
Subject: RE : Re: Beta needed for a Rodney/Daniel NC-17 story
bookmangal
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Hey ShaMak,
no problem. Thank you for your help :-)
 
Anne

ShaMak <shamakff@...> a écrit :
Hey, Anne!
If you are willing to wait until the first week of December, I can give it a shot!
 
ShaMak
----- Original Message ----
From: Anne <bookmangal@yahoo.fr>
To: wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Saturday, November 18, 2006 4:55:28 AM
Subject: [wraithbeta] Beta needed for a Rodney/Daniel NC-17 story

Hi, I'm looking for a beta reader for my McKay/Jackson fic. Adult
rated. I mostly need someone that can do the
grammar/spelling/ punctuation checks. hope to hear from you guys :)

Anne





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#406 From: "Dom" <dfbbear58@...>
Date: Mon Nov 20, 2006 1:00 pm
Subject: Need Beta for a NC-17 Adult Rated Slash Story
dfbbear58
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I have a completed story that needs a second pair of eyes to review
grammer, punctuation and welcome comments on the storyline for an NC-
17 rated slash story [angst, hurt/comfort, first time, drama, episode
related - seasons one and two].  Major relationship is Sheppard and
McKay.  Title: The Light In His Eyes.

Dom
[dfbbear58@...]

#407 From: "Jill" <alterangirl@...>
Date: Mon Nov 20, 2006 2:17 pm
Subject: Re: Beta wanted, McKay POV, pg-13
alterangirl
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I'd be happy to look at it!  Just send it to the e-mail address shown
above.

--- In wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com, <girlgonemadd@...> wrote:
>
> Need a beta to look over grammer, punctuation and story flow for a
short story that's a McKay POV on the last season episode The Return 1.
>
> --Terri
>

#408 From: "fluffylittlewolf" <hugglewolf@...>
Date: Mon Nov 20, 2006 5:41 pm
Subject: Re: Need Beta for a NC-17 Adult Rated Slash Story
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Hi

I've never beta'd before, although I do write, so I'll give it a look
if you want.

Regards
Huggle


--- In wraithbeta@yahoogroups.com, "Dom" <dfbbear58@...> wrote:
>
> I have a completed story that needs a second pair of eyes to review
> grammer, punctuation and welcome comments on the storyline for an NC-
> 17 rated slash story [angst, hurt/comfort, first time, drama, episode
> related - seasons one and two].  Major relationship is Sheppard and
> McKay.  Title: The Light In His Eyes.
>
> Dom
> [dfbbear58@...]
>

#409 From: Kat Ellis <zzkat_ellis@...>
Date: Mon Nov 20, 2006 9:32 pm
Subject: Beta reader needed for McKay / Shep centric team fic
zzkat_ellis
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Hi,
 
My usual beta is still AWOL so I am once more out here in cyber space looking for a beta reader.  My story is a team fic with a focus on McKay and Sheppard.  Parts 1 to 6 are already published here:
 
 
I'm looking for a beta who will keep an eye on the flow of the story, correct any overly English-sounding dialogue, help me stay in character and help with technobabble (I did soft sciences... what more can I say?).  Oh, and any nudges on grammar (especially commas) more than welcome.
 
Part 7 is (oh so very nearly) ready for beta-ing and there should be 3 or 4 more parts.  Any offers?
 
Thanks,
 
Kat. 
 
 

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#410 From: "g0b8n" <g0b8n@...>
Date: Thu Nov 23, 2006 3:38 pm
Subject: Nice Beta needed for all character Drabbles
g0b8n
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Hello,
I´m in desperate need for a nice, understanding beta to correct my
fictions. The story consist of 12 single Drabbles, each 300-1200
words, different "What if -" situations. No slash/het, general stories.
Please respond.
Yours, GB

[If he or she would like to read first before contact me, please try
out the penname Gundambaby on ff.net]

#411 From: "g0b8n" <g0b8n@...>
Date: Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:57 am
Subject: Urgent! Beta needed for McKay mpreg story!
g0b8n
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I need a quick beta to proof read a 18 pages story, McKay centric, no
slash, no real shpipping. Please help me!

#412 From: "mysticmcknight" <mysticmcknight@...>
Date: Sun Nov 26, 2006 10:35 pm
Subject: Beta needed please, for PG slash called the Reunion
mysticmcknight
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Hey guys, I'm in need of a beta for an 18 page AU story. The pairings
are McShep, McKay/O'Neil (Jack/Daniel implied). This is my wish of
what I'd like to see happen after the Return part 1, so there are
spoilers for all seasons up to that episode.

If interested please contact me at mysticmcknight@.... Would
appreciate someone to go over spelling, grammar and any story in
flaws, and someone able to do so in about a week. I know with the
holidays that may be asking too much, but it is rather short so i'm
hopeful. Thanks for the consideration,

Mystic

#413 From: "Kirstyanne drunnond" <k.drummond2@...>
Date: Mon Nov 27, 2006 11:11 am
Subject: (No subject)
donnatlela2004
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hi

This is my first attempt at writting fanfiction and i'm looking for a
beta, someone to go over the spelling and the grammer and punctuation.
  It's a McShep and McLorne Alien made them do it, 11 pages.

If anyone is interested the please contact me at
k.drummond2@...

thank you.

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