Hi! Two messages to reply to; first, Redthunder's ... I apologize if this is beating a dead horse, but these two gave me troubles so I thought I'd throw out...
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zellieh
May 16, 2006 8:39 pm
This story is pretty much finished, and I could probably get away with posting it as it is, but I'd prefer to have someone - or several someones - check it...
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girlgonemadd@...
girlgonemadd001
May 17, 2006 4:49 pm
This is part four of my Lessons story that involves John wumping and a suicide attempt. It's about 900 words long. I need a good grammer check and...
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liluchica13
May 17, 2006 5:41 pm
Hi, I am totally new to the fanfiction business (the writing side anyway), but just got a sudden urge this afternoon to write something. It's short, OC...
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rock4eva2001
May 18, 2006 7:32 am
I have a shep/mckay fic that needs to be looked over. I will be very grateful for any help people can give me....
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sheppweir4eva
May 19, 2006 12:39 am
I've written an Alternate Reality fic and i need someone to look it over for me, i'd be so greatfull if someone could look it over for me. If anyone could...
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Laryn
leilaryn
May 22, 2006 1:13 pm
I've got a question, and since my last useful grammar class was at least a decade ago (possibly two), please bear with me on this one. The story I'm currently...
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Aiden Byrne
sheppweir4eva
May 22, 2006 2:00 pm
Hi Laryn I've just got your email, and to be honest i'm not that good with Grammar and punctuation so i don't think i'll be any help, i'm really sorry wish i...
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redthunder213
May 22, 2006 2:33 pm
... Example 3 is the only one of the three that is grammatically accurate, and I've never heard of any other way of putting dialogue tags inside two sets of...
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Kristin Bledsoe
feathergryph
May 22, 2006 4:49 pm
I'm not an expert, so I could be wrong, but I have to disagree with RT (below). I've seen Example 2 used quite frequently in professional novels. While some...
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Slade, Penny
ophelia98104
May 22, 2006 4:51 pm
I agree, the only time the second have should be capitalized is if it starts a whole new sentence, not if it is a continuation . ... From:...
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Alyse
alyseci5
May 22, 2006 5:35 pm
Examples two and three are both correct usage, providing that example two is the continuation of the same sentence. Example one is not correct, at least not if...
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redthunder213
May 22, 2006 5:59 pm
... I've always written something similar to the above as: "You know," blustered Rodney. "I have absolutely no idea what you're talking about." Is that also...
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Alyse
alyseci5
May 22, 2006 6:32 pm
... It can be *provided* you wanted to have two separate sentences. In other words, if you wanted to write: "You know. I have absolutely no idea what you're...
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Marie-France
marf_l
May 22, 2006 8:09 pm
Dual function posting :) I woud like to offer beta-reading skills, such as they are. I have grammar books, dictionaries and thesauruses and plenty of time. I ...
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Anthony Docimo
rodlox
May 23, 2006 12:17 am
... If I may ask, is that a British expression? What does "a turn up for the books" mean? *curious* thank you....
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laura_hackett@...
laura_trekkie
May 23, 2006 1:27 am
It's certainly a phrase I am familiar with, and I'm a Brit. I don't know whether it's exclusively British though. It means basically, a surprise, something...
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Michelle
swordoftheel...
May 24, 2006 3:04 am
I need someone that would like to bang out all the spelling, grammer, and confusing parts of my story out. I don't care if you bash parts of my story,...
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moonshadegoldgirl
moonshadegol...
May 27, 2006 10:09 pm
Hello all. I just joined. I go by Lady Valmar. I just need someone to basically beta or proofread just the introduction to my fic Ophidian Equinox. Thanks LV...
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moonshadegoldgirl
moonshadegol...
May 27, 2006 10:11 pm
... I ... like ... I just joined and put up a request but after seeing this I'm going for it. I just need someone to beta my 7 page introduction to my Ophidian...
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moonshadegoldgirl
moonshadegol...
May 30, 2006 5:04 am
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/forbiddengalaxies/?yguid=240739713 This is the web address if anybody is interested. It's meant for gen, OC fics and a few others...
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alexandrialuthor
alexandrialu...
May 31, 2006 11:15 pm
I need a beta promise to look after it and feed it cookies for sugar high. LoL SLASH( McSHep) AU Story: That touch of mind(au from the movie) Lenth: well its...
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Iocane
swynants7
Jun 8, 2006 1:19 am
Hello, I've just finished a 30,000+ word AU and need some help with a few things. It's not ready for being fully betad yet but I would like someone who's...
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Iocane
swynants7
Jun 8, 2006 1:30 am
I should have mentioned - the AU is McShep slash with some NC-17 bits. Io ... From: Iocane To: Wraithbeta Sent: Wednesday, June 07, 2006 9:20 PM Subject:...
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Iocane
swynants7
Jun 8, 2006 2:44 am
Greetings from beyond the void, (I figured it was better than hello!) Unfortunately my current beta is unable to continue with my stuff so I've got a mound of...
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lkfan1
Jun 12, 2006 4:48 am
Hi I'm currently beta'less (is that a word?). My beta is without internet access and has various other things going on in her life at present. Trust me...
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Lesley Wilmoth
swinggirl3
Jun 13, 2006 2:58 am
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alexandrialuthor
alexandrialu...
Jun 13, 2006 9:16 pm
I`m looking for a nice Beta!!!! I`m working on a challenge and would like a Beta to go over it. Grammar and etc., well i`m a mess. Its an AU McShep for the...
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sandjh
Jun 15, 2006 5:44 pm
Hi all, My one regular beta reader is having computer problems, the other has not gotten back to me yet. I'm looking for someone to beta read chapter four of...
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Larkin
theaquariado...
Jun 17, 2006 8:55 am
Hey everyone, it's been a while since the beta directory was mentioned and now - ITS READY!! It can be found at http://www.sgx.amuseingwriters.co.uk You can...
