That is perfect. I'll look in Word help screen and try and figure it out.
Valerie, you might want to check this out also. Great way to format feedback.
Thank you.

I have a Mac, but I've done it on a PC in the past and I think that it is pretty
much the same. Look under Tools for Track Changes. When it is on, you can delete
a word and it shows what you have deleted in the right hand margin. Same goes
for words you add, etc. You should be able to add it to your toolbar so that
it's always there and accepting and rejecting changes is easy.

Glad I could help. :)

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wrote:
>
> That is perfect. I'll look in Word help screen and try and figure it out.
Valerie, you might want to check this out also. Great way to format feedback.
Thank you.
>

http://venivdvici.blogspot.com/2011/08/copyediting-my-second-novel.html

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That is unbelieveable IUniverse did that and here I've been going around telling
people to check them out. Well, so long as they don't make the movie ( did you
see the NY Times article yesterday?), that author really got screwed. Holloywood
turned his book into a movie and bypassed him totally. Movie about a messenger
in NY City delivering a mysterious package. "Foot Artis Good Art" is definately
Hollywood material. Joanie

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> http://venivdvici.blogspot.com/2011/08/copyediting-my-second-novel.html
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Apologies for not being able to make the last meeting, August has been a busy
month for me.  I wanted to take a few minutes and introduce myself to the group.
I am an ADHD coach, a life transitions coach, a professional organizer and a
freelance writer from Alton Bay.  I make about half my current income from
freelance writing projects where I focus on writing for the web including web
content, SEO articles, and ghost writing blogs.  The majority of my work is for
hire which means it isn't published under my name but I have included some links
below.

I also write poetry and have two novels and a non-fiction book in the works.  I
don't have much time for personal writing right now however, so these projects
are slow going.

I am planning to enter a few poetry competitions in the coming weeks and would
love some feedback as I finalize my entries. Watch for them in the next few
days.

If you want to see what I do and check out my writing, you can find me at these
links.

Turning Leaf Life Coaching Blog - http://turningleafcoaching.wordpress.com/

Chaos Redefined Blog - http://chaosredefined.wordpress.com/

Green Girly Girl Blog - http://greengirlygirl.com/

Sorry you missed the last meeting.  It was fun and productive.  I could use some
organization:)
Hope you can jump in and help with edits and we will help you!
Happy Writing,
Pam
--- In whitemountainwriters@yahoogroups.com, "rorifreelance" <rori@...> wrote:
>
> Apologies for not being able to make the last meeting, August has been a busy
month for me.  I wanted to take a few minutes and introduce myself to the group.
I am an ADHD coach, a life transitions coach, a professional organizer and a
freelance writer from Alton Bay.  I make about half my current income from
freelance writing projects where I focus on writing for the web including web
content, SEO articles, and ghost writing blogs.  The majority of my work is for
hire which means it isn't published under my name but I have included some links
below.
>
> I also write poetry and have two novels and a non-fiction book in the works. 
I don't have much time for personal writing right now however, so these projects
are slow going.
>
> I am planning to enter a few poetry competitions in the coming weeks and would
love some feedback as I finalize my entries. Watch for them in the next few
days.
>
> If you want to see what I do and check out my writing, you can find me at
these links.
>
> Turning Leaf Life Coaching Blog - http://turningleafcoaching.wordpress.com/
>
> Chaos Redefined Blog - http://chaosredefined.wordpress.com/
>
> Green Girly Girl Blog - http://greengirlygirl.com/
>

Great piece!! I printed it out and will get it back to you with comments.This
should be in every newspper in the country. Zoe was chipped and the chp stopped
working years ago plus it drifted!!
Have a happy storm.  Joanie
--- In whitemountainwriters@yahoogroups.com, Pam Maynard <jcpams@...> wrote:
>
> Hello everyone,
> If anyone has time, I posted Dog Nose Prints to be critiqued.  I had planned
to submit it to Dogs for Kids mag, but they stopped publication.  Maybe
Highlights or Guardian Angel Kids Mag.
> Thanks so much!
>
>  
>
>
> Pamela Gleason Maynard
>
> http://pmaynardwrites.blogspot.com/
>
> "Pleasure in the job puts perfection in the work. " Aristotle
>

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Aesthetica Magazine seeks submissions for its Creative Works Competition. Submit
poetry or fiction. Winners of each category will win �500 (approximately
$800) and other prizes. Deadline: August 31. Entry fee, which allows for two
poems or short stories: �10 (approximately $16). For complete details,
visit www.aestheticamagazine.com/submission_guide.htm.

Gemini Magazine seeks short-short story submissions. Submit up to 1,000 words.
The winner will receive $1,000 and publication. Deadline: August 31. Entry fee:
$4. For complete details, visit www.gemini-magazine.com.

Green Chair Reader, a Web journal of short screenplays, seeks submissions from
accomplished authors. Submit short scripts of ten pages or less online. Authors
are required to list at least one scriptwriting credential. Deadline: August 31.
For complete details, visit www.greenchairpictures.com.

Alaska Business Monthly provides analysis of issues and trends affecting Alaskan
businesses and features stories about the individuals, organizations, and
companies that shape the Alaskan economy. Stories must have an Alaskan focus.
Editorial guidelines are online at
www.akbizmag.com/editorial/writers-guidelines.html. Submit query and cover
letter by email to editor@.... Debbie Cutler, Managing Editor, Alaska
Business Monthly, 501 W. Northern Lights Blvd., Ste. 100, Anchorage, AK 99503.

The Fearless Poetry Series seeks submissions of poems and prose poems for its
third anthology, Turning the Page: Poems of Trauma, Healing, and Transcendence.
If your work is chosen you will receive two copies of Turning the Page and a 30
percent discount on additional copies. Reading fee: $10. Submit online at
www.fearlessbooks.com/Poetry.htm.

Amoskeag, a national literary journal, seeks submissions for its spring 2012
Identity issue. Submit poetry, essays, or fiction that highlights individual,
place, group, or cultural identity. Deadline: November 1. For complete details,
visit www.amoskeagjournal.com. Mail submissions to Amoskeag: The Journal of
SNHU, School of Liberal Arts, Southern New Hampshire University, 2500 North
River Rd., Manchester, NH, 03106-1045.

Consumer Media Network, a one-stop online resource for consumers, is looking for
an experienced blogger who has a demonstrated interest in, and knowledge of, the
real estate industry for a part-time position. The company is looking for
someone to write on a contract basis for a new renter?s information site. This
blogger should be familiar with real estate laws for tenants, be able to provide
advice for renters, know tenant?s rights, and be able to report on real estate
news. The ideal candidate will be able to present dry information in an
interesting, creative way. This is a remote position, so the applicant must be
able work independently and with little direction. Please send resume and two
writing samples to amerusi@.... For more information, visit www.cmn.com.

Can Serrat, an artists? retreat outside Barcelona, Spain, annually provides two
writers with a fully funded, thirty-day residency. No application fee. No
nationality or age requirements. Applications for one writing residency are
accepted in July; applications for the other should be submitted in February.
For more information, visit www.canserrat.org (click ?Stipends?).

Creative Print Publishing Ltd seeks novel submissions for a monthly contest.
Winners are offered royalties, a contract, and promotion and marketing. For
complete details, visit
www.creativeprintpublishing.com/publishing/competitions.php. Email the editor at
phillip@....

Echelon Magazine, an online publication serving GLBT business professionals,
seeks writers who cover the stock market as well as articles about entertainment
business, GLBT business profiles, and new items. For more information, visit
www.echelonmagazine.com. Submit query by email to editorial@....
Echelon Magazine, 6404 Wilshire Blvd, Ste. 1829, Los Angeles, CA 90048.

Hunger Mountain seeks submissions for their website. Submit a manuscript of
creative nonfiction of up to 10,000 words. The winner will receive $1,000 and
publication. Deadline: September 10. Entry fee: $20. For complete details, visit
www.hungermtn.org.

Dailysource.org, a 501(c) 3 nonprofit organization, publishes high-quality news
and information from leading sources across the Internet to help the public more
effectively utilize their time, money, and power to benefit themselves, our
country, and our world. The site seeks a part-time managing editor to train and
manage the editors of the daily news site and oversee front-page editing. The
job averages eighteen hours a week and is a telecommuting position. For more
information about the organization?s mission, visit www.dailysource.org. To
apply, send your resume (preferably in a Word file or as a link) and a cover
letter in the body of the email to applications@....

Inspired Words is a program of the Currier Museum in Manchester, NH, program,
with two upcoming programs. On August 14, the museum will host a Writing in the
Gallery session at 2 p.m, when docents will be present to discuss
landscape-inspired works by New England artists, while writers get a chance to
view the artwork and start writing pieces inspired by it. (Interested writers
can also visit the museum at any time to wander through the exhibit and find
their inspiration on their own, as long as they write about the selected
artwork.) Then, on August 28 at 2 p.m., there will be a reading of selected
writings inspired by the Currier's first video exhibition, Shifting Terrain:
Landscape Video. Send submissions to inspiredwords@... by August 24 to
be included in the program. The second program will be presented
on�September, 11 at 2 p.m. in the museum's auditorium as a remembrance of
the events of 9/11 on the tenth anniversary of that fateful day. Writers are
invited to submit pieces they wrote over the years or new pieces to be read.
Send submissions to the inspiredwords@... by�September 7 to be
included in the program. Poetry, prose, short scripts, raps, lyrics: any form of
words (preferably 500 or fewer) on the program topic. The Currier is also
pleased to include published pieces as long as the original author is credited.

CONSEQUENCE publishes short fiction, poetry, nonfiction, interviews, visual art,
and reviews primarily focused on the culture of war and social injustice.
Previously unpublished works welcome between June 1 and November 1. Fiction and
nonfiction: submit one piece of no more than 5,000 words. Poetry: submit up to
five poems of any length. Translations acceptable. Submit through online
submissions manager or regular mail. No email submissions. Cover letter should
include both regular mail and e-mail addresses, phone number, title of
manuscript, and short bio. Include SASE with sufficient postage. Each submission
may be accepted for publication in the print edition of CONSEQUENCE and (with
writer?s permission) CONSEQUENCE Online. For complete guidelines, visit
www.consequencemagazine.org/submissions.html. CONSEQUENCE Magazine, PO Box 323,
Cohasset, MA 02025-0323.

Pam, My first suggestion is that this should be written for adults and not for
kids. It would have a very large market. Then after adults learn about this,
write a piece for the kids. But start with the grown ups!!

--- In whitemountainwriters@yahoogroups.com, Pam Maynard <jcpams@...> wrote:
>
> Hello everyone,
> If anyone has time, I posted Dog Nose Prints to be critiqued.  I had planned
to submit it to Dogs for Kids mag, but they stopped publication.  Maybe
Highlights or Guardian Angel Kids Mag.
> Thanks so much!
>
>  
>
>
> Pamela Gleason Maynard
>
> http://pmaynardwrites.blogspot.com/
>
> "Pleasure in the job puts perfection in the work. " Aristotle
>

I am posting a series of blog posts on the topic of "Evaluating Our Economic
Spirit" and I would appreciate your feedback. Particularly what questions you'd
like answered, thoughts you'd like explored or personal stories you have that
relate to mine. Basically anything that would entice you to read more.

Here's the link ...
http://blog.trishwhynot.com/2011/09/evaluating-our-economic-spirit-part-i.html

Thanks!
Trish

The ethics of poverty. Truthfully, healthful food is out there and cheaper than
supermarket food. Dandelions are free. One of the most healthful foods out there
and every part can be used. Blackberries were bountiful this year. The 2 gallons
I picked will last til next year.And the hurricaine did not knock a single berry
to the ground. I was shocked. Broiler chickens can be eaten in about 8 weeks and
chickens are an easy keep. Just don't give them names. You'll never eat
supermarket chicken again ( even organic). The nuts of the beech tree ( favorite
food of deer) are free and delicious. Those deer aren't stupid. There are lots
of books about eating of the land including some great reciipe books. I'll look
up the titles for you if you are interested. And if you check out the
supermarkets, some, like Fiddleheads always has a big selection of day old
fruits and vegetables for less than $1 a package. They are probably fresher than
the produce at Hannefords. And the fish are biting if you'd like a nice grilled
bass or trout!!!

--- In whitemountainwriters@yahoogroups.com, "twhynot43" <Trish@...> wrote:
>
> I am posting a series of blog posts on the topic of "Evaluating Our Economic
Spirit" and I would appreciate your feedback. Particularly what questions you'd
like answered, thoughts you'd like explored or personal stories you have that
relate to mine. Basically anything that would entice you to read more.
>
> Here's the link ...
http://blog.trishwhynot.com/2011/09/evaluating-our-economic-spirit-part-i.html
>
> Thanks!
> Trish
>

Hi All,

There must be a word out there, but I'm struggling to find it so I'm hoping you
are up for the challenge.

Here is the sentence ... Feeding our spirits is satisfying while feeding a
status symbol leaves us wanting for more.

I'm looking for a word for "wanting for more." Is there such a beast?

I'm trying to portray the difference between what fills us and what drains us. I
could just use those words - "fill vs drain" - I suppose, but there must be a
"satisfy vs ___."

Ideas?

Thanks!
Trish

Hi All,

There must be a word out there, but I'm struggling to find it so I'm hoping you
are up for the challenge.

Here is the sentence ... Feeding our spirits is satisfying while feeding a
status symbol leaves us wanting for more.

I'm looking for a word for "wanting for more." Is there such a beast?

I'm trying to portray the difference between what fills us and what drains us. I
could just use those words - "fill vs drain" - I suppose, but there must be a
"satisfy vs ___."

Ideas?

Thanks!
Trish

Great resource! Didn't know about it. Thanks so much!

--- In whitemountainwriters@yahoogroups.com, Pam Maynard <jcpams@...> wrote:
>
> All i could think of was incomplete...
>  
> Have you tried the reverse dictionary?
>  
>  http://onelook.com/reverse-dictionary.shtml
>
> Pamela Gleason Maynard
>
> http://pmaynardwrites.blogspot.com/
> www.between2moms.com
>  
> Twitter: @pamelamaynard
>
> Enthusiasm is excitement with inspiration, motivation, and a pinch of
creativity. Bo Bennett
>
> From: twhynot43 <Trish@...>
> To: whitemountainwriters@yahoogroups.com
> Sent: Thursday, October 20, 2011 9:56 AM
> Subject: [whitemountainwriters] Looking for a word & could use some help
>
>
>  
> Hi All,
>
> There must be a word out there, but I'm struggling to find it so I'm hoping
you are up for the challenge.
>
> Here is the sentence ... Feeding our spirits is satisfying while feeding a
status symbol leaves us wanting for more.
>
> I'm looking for a word for "wanting for more." Is there such a beast?
>
> I'm trying to portray the difference between what fills us and what drains us.
I could just use those words - "fill vs drain" - I suppose, but there must be a
"satisfy vs ___."
>
> Ideas?
>
> Thanks!
> Trish
>

How about phrasing it using the recipricals?

We are planning a Meeting in May.Date to come. Some of the members have been
published recently and we want to celebrate their success and help promote
them.Please share with the group what you are working on.