Rod, That's a really good idea! To carve out a couple (or few) characters, sketch them out and let them play the action in the second half. I think that...
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albiaicehouse
Dec 12, 2009 8:53 pm
Dave, I like it. As to the "unsure" reactions, I recommend you follow your own advice - play with it! The core of the dream has been related in the later...
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GLORIA
gloriawb
Dec 12, 2009 8:53 pm
Wrote this this morning. Can't decide if it is a decent poem, or a card liner note. Words Unsaid When I die will you Tell me all the things You meant to say ...
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dave_n2chi
Dec 12, 2009 3:11 am
Need your opinions, crits, suggestions. I read the following essay to my local writing group yesterday and some liked it, others were "unsure." Hahaha! We...
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dave_n2chi
Dec 12, 2009 3:11 am
"Benevolence, is manna on which deceit feasts, and banks." Damn, is that ever true, Bernard! Well put. Thanks. Nice piece. Dave...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Dec 11, 2009 7:03 pm
Authors are needed to participate in the 2010 Cowskin Prairie United Daughters of the Confederacy Book Festival to be held March 27th in Grove, Oklahoma. The...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Dec 10, 2009 3:00 pm
Welcome to ticket2write. You are wise to consider these matters before getting too deep into your project. You can seek and pay for professional advice, or...
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Eek
j_eek
Dec 9, 2009 7:42 pm
I am a new member in Florida. I am working on a non-fiction book about a dramatic portion of my life. I would like to illustrate the book with some edited...
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Amy Rissna Thompson
riisna
Dec 9, 2009 2:56 am
... Amy ________________________________ De: Bernard d <rede2rollbaby@...> Para: ticket2write@yahoogroups.com Enviado: mar, diciembre 8, 2009 3:40:30...
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Bernard d
rede2rollbaby
Dec 8, 2009 11:28 pm
Benevolence, Beware. Seen, those of Compassion, loquacious, in their concern, as vain battles for some under-dog, they proceed to fight. Age and futile...
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Amy Thompson
riisna
Dec 8, 2009 11:25 pm
Dear friends, I thought that you might enjoy this and it would save you time. Some friends asked me to compile a list of favorite Christmas songs and Carols. I...
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erniep23
Dec 8, 2009 9:59 pm
thanks, I'll give it a shot....
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Amy Rissna Thompson
riisna
Dec 5, 2009 12:06 am
Dear Wings, you may naturally take Carlin’s views and publish it in your parish magazine if you like. I’m sharing this because I think that many people...
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wings081
Dec 4, 2009 12:03 pm
Hi Ernie, I suggest you contact Whitmore Publishing Company of Pittsburgh Pennsylvania. They will only accept, in the first instance, submissions by e-mail and...
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wings081
Dec 4, 2009 11:45 am
Dear Amy Cornwall,a spit of land in the South West Corner of England, is jokingly known as 'Costa Geriatrica' due to the proliferation of those senior citizens...
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erniep23
Dec 4, 2009 9:54 am
I'm trying to sell my comic strips, syndication, etc...does anyone have any good advice for getting strips to be seen by the right people? thanks...
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manycountryselves
manycountrys...
Dec 3, 2009 5:40 pm
I wrote this as a contest for writing a Poem in Story form. I took this from my own childhood, and hopefully speaks for many children now. Thanks for reading...
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wings081
Dec 3, 2009 12:06 pm
Dear Pauline Thank you for your feedback on the Magnophiz. Patents? I have a small book full of inventions not yet prepared for patenting. Childrens' toys;a...
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wings081
Dec 3, 2009 10:20 am
Dear Jasmine Please allow me, on behalf of the moderators and members of t2w, to congratulate you on the publication of your first book. From now on you will...
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Dan Langerock
asst_chaplain
Dec 3, 2009 5:21 am
Congratulations Jasmine!! Blessings, Chaplain Dan ________________________________ From: Jasmine K <jasminekk@...> Sent: Wednesday, December 2, 2009...
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Jasmine K
moonshinegarden
Dec 3, 2009 12:11 am
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Dan Langerock
asst_chaplain
Dec 2, 2009 4:33 am
I really enjoyed this poem, very professionally done. Could be a classic someday. Chaplain Dan ________________________________ From: David Roth...
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David Roth
davidjroth2002
Dec 2, 2009 2:37 am
Hi Gwen, Thanks for your comments. I do have a question, however. Did you really mean "syesthesia" (an "oddity" of human perception in which words, musical...
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Amy Thompson
riisna
Dec 2, 2009 12:26 am
A friend sent me the following advice, and I thought it was worth posting for the members to read. Amy. George Carlin's Views on Aging Do you realize that the...
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Pauline Hamilton
phamilton66nz
Dec 2, 2009 12:20 am
Dear Wings, I find myself drawn to your solution for global warming, this Magnophiz sounds quite the contraption. Have you considered taking out a patent on...
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wings081
Dec 1, 2009 5:22 pm
Magnophiz. Saving the Earth for future generations. You may never have heard of the Magnophiz, which is to be expected as the Magnophiz has yet to be...
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Jerry S
jerry5849
Dec 1, 2009 3:31 pm
BD, I will let someone else comment (or not) on the content of this piece, but I do have something to point out as far as the mechanics. In reading this, I...
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queenie_of_cryptic_cy...
queenie_of_c...
Dec 1, 2009 1:44 pm
Kudos dear friend. I'd say the best of luck to you but you don't need luck, you have skills. Hugs, Gwennie...
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queenie_of_cryptic_cy...
queenie_of_c...
Dec 1, 2009 1:43 pm
Dave, This is truly a delightful read. The rhyme, symbolism, and multi-tiered personifications are great. But I believe another strengthing agent of this poem...
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Malcolm Archibald
malcolm_arch...
Dec 1, 2009 11:09 am
My thanks, Suzianne We'll see how it goes! Very best  Malcolm ... From: Susan Donahue <suzianne411@...> Subject: [ticket2write] Re: Hi To:...
