Hi Rod! I do all my webwork myself using http://homestead.com I only pay $25.99 a month (used to be less than $20, but I added some storage). I love it! It's...
Dumbfound I wake up from a dream about hallways and doors some locked, some not. At 4 something AM my mother being dead bolts within my skull like a new...
... Thanks Suzianne! LOL Yeah, very bad day. It was more cathartic than anything; helped push out the kaka (is that a better word? Hehehe), into a more...
Dave, You could build up the victim's character more so we care about what is happening to them. At: "The rhythmic flap of a mysterious bird, on some...
Dearest Rod, I believe the personal, conversational tone creates an intrigue which draws the reader into your poem. Many of us can identify with these sorts of...
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. This is just a condensed version that I had to make 500 words for a class and wanted some feedback before...
Hi Bernie Excellent, but there is another side to the coin and the obverse is too disastrous to put to rhyme. The day star. centre of our solar system,...
It's the Fourth of July and to all my American family and friends, I wish you a happy holiday and trust you may long continue to celebrate the breaking of the...
I have been accused of initiating the following complaint. Although not guilty, it is quite within the bounds of possibility of my pen as I enjoy having a dig...
I'm certain this person was a writer for Yes, Minister! LOL Dave ... From: ticket2write@yahoogroups.com [mailto:ticket2write@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of...
My old friend Wings, Thank you for your well wishes to us, your American cousins. Do not however feel saddened by your "…country's oppression of the past."...
PRECIPITATION A slight breeze hazes, the river's wide expanse, a once shining mirrored surface, dulls to gray. The myriad ripples, shimmering as they dance, ...
Hi there my old friend Jerry. Re."American cousins" and "Winston Churchill" How much closer could we get when Winston's mother,Lady Randolph Churchill,nee...
Hi David Re. "Yes Minister" More like Victor Meldrew,played by Richard Wilson in "One foot in the grave" whose answer to every petty annoyance was: "I do not...
Hello Robbo & all the writers of ticket2write: I am new to the group and i go by ASET. I have been writting for years with no real publishments. Thank you...
Bernie - You do weave a spell with this, taking the reader from the calm waters to the haze, the mist, the rain. Painted in words, I see the trees, the...
It has been a couple weeks since I have joined this group, I have spent that time "lurking" I guess you could say, seeing what others are writing, reading and...
Dear Aset Welcome to this group of wordsmiths. Aset from Tampa, now there's an enigma. I wonder in which of the following I should place you: Aberdeen Skills...
Dear Kelly You are very welcome to this group and I can assure you ,if you let us see a sample of your non-fiction work, there are many here who will give you...
Sterilized Stainless steel Sterilized It's a whole new way in this new time Passing in halls that self clean as a reponse to touch walls where stains disappear...
My first submission - A journey is defined as a trip from one place to another, for me this process would take me from a childhood of abuse and mental illness,...
Well, I had to work that day....while the sun parched the rest of the idiots at the "Standup for America" event at the park....but thank you for your...
Stones on the Green Sunshine heats the verdant green Squirrels play upon the green Wind blows soft over the green Birds fly high above green Raindrops fall...
Kelly, This must be one of the toughest of writes for you. I admire you very much. This beginning has me hooked. I like the colloquial style. Here are some...
My writing agency, Gnosis Arts Multimedia Communications LLC, will be hosting a Philosophical Practice conference with British author Anthony Peake. Please...
Dear Kelly I wonder if this,your first submission here, is an autobiographical story of your life to date. For those of us with a happy childhood it is...
Life's Theatre presents: The Mirthless Parody… Welcome, to all those by fate disenchanted, to this, frequently presented, parody of life. Embraced, euphoria,...
