Dear Jacqui, This story is going to be fun. I have a friend who writes Regency period romances. That genre is on the far side of the univerce from street...
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nigel_tiptoe
Jan 23, 2008 1:18 pm
Mate All true, but I feel we need to simplify. I am inclined to define courage as the ability to act coolly and effectively in the face of threat and danger....
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wings081
Jan 23, 2008 2:07 pm
Hi Nigel. Very valid points you raised. Re. "Forgive cowardice particularly when openly admitted" I hold a grudging admiration for a coward, for I could never...
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Jackie Jones
jmjones13348
Jan 23, 2008 5:05 pm
Hi, Jacqui Smith, from Jackie Jones! (are we related...?) :) I find your chapter interesting, but understand it is first stage and you will go back in and...
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Sleepy at Gmail
sleepyscribbler
Jan 23, 2008 5:08 pm
My maternal grandfather was not exactly a conscientious objector in WW1, but a conscientious non-combatant. He accepted the call-up but refused to bear arms. ...
35528
Jackie Jones
jmjones13348
Jan 23, 2008 5:21 pm
This is the first chapter of a fantasy/romance/suspense novel. I need to know if I'm going in the right direction. =============== Dark Glass Chapter One ...
35529
rede2rollbaby
Jan 23, 2008 7:13 pm
"Dark Solitude's Expanse". Night's stillness falls, with a velvet mask, the harbinger, who bears unspoken fears. That dark nemesis, brings reality to task, ...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Jan 23, 2008 8:06 pm
Dear Jackie...Oh, my. This brought tears to my eyes. You began with something quite bright and beautiful, then plunged the reader into the darkness. The...
35531
wings081
Jan 23, 2008 10:17 pm
Dear Sleepy Re "Grandfather accompanied on these missions by a Ghurka" Let me tell you a story about the Ghurkas: I was stationed in the Far East flying DC3s...
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wings081
Jan 23, 2008 10:27 pm
Dear Jackie Although publishers are not too fond of stories in the first person POV.your story held me until the end.The opening was interesting and as for the...
35533
Jackie Jones
jmjones13348
Jan 23, 2008 11:15 pm
Susan, Oh, my to you! Thank you so much for those words, they truly encourage me. This novel is one I want to work with, until it's perfect. I enjoyed writing...
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Jackie Jones
jmjones13348
Jan 23, 2008 11:16 pm
Wings, thank you. I knew publishers weren't fond of first person POV, but this story begged to be told from Thalyn's viewpoint. She goes through a lot, one...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Jan 24, 2008 2:44 am
Jan 26, Feb 23, Mar 29, Apr 19, May 31, 7pm-10pm Open Mic Soirée Music, Skits/Comedy, Poetry, Pantomime, Tea, Coffee, Goodies and Games Open Mic sign-up, call...
35536
wings081
Jan 25, 2008 8:20 am
dear Jackie I'm in a facetious mood this early morning and after reading your reply to Susan's comments on your work,I am forced, as a person who has always...
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wings081
Jan 26, 2008 2:27 pm
Jackie Jones 35528 Dear Jackie There is a report in my newspaper this morning which may assist you with your story: I quote: A young woman jumped to her death...
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Jackie Jones
jmjones13348
Jan 26, 2008 9:19 pm
Ouch...poor woman! But I don't know how to break it to you. You see, later in the book, Mother tells the truth. No rape. Twins aren't even hers. Lots of twists...
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Jackie Jones
jmjones13348
Jan 26, 2008 9:19 pm
Here's the next chapter. I really appreciate any and all feedback. This chapter leads into the disaster. ============ Chapter Two (1452 words) It was going to...
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wings081
Jan 26, 2008 11:55 pm
Dear Jackie The plot deepens and I try to imagine many sorts of reasons for this peculiar love-hate relationship between the main characters. Here is one of my...
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Rafael Alvarado
md84rfja65
Jan 27, 2008 5:24 pm
... The World Wide Word Radio Networks Presents This Sunday January 27 on The Moe Green Poetry Hour To listen to show click below Listen live or later ...
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Rafael Alvarado
md84rfja65
Jan 29, 2008 7:36 am
åThe World Wide Word Radio Network Present A Sunday afternoon of Poetry At The Amsterdam Cafe February 3 http://www.blogtalkradio.com/onword/page/3 Amsterdam...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Jan 29, 2008 5:30 pm
... From: Rex Walton <rexwalton@...> To: Undisclosed-Recipient@... Sent: Tuesday, January 29, 2008 7:44:46 AM Subject: February Tuesdays with...
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Carol
carol_emt87
Jan 30, 2008 6:53 pm
Dear Suzi, Thanks for posting this every month. I've tried for a couple of years to get on Rex's list, and for some reason, it never quite works out. I think...
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Rafael Alvarado
md84rfja65
Jan 30, 2008 8:00 pm
... The World Wide Word Radio Networks Presents This Wednsday January 30 on The Moe Green Poetry Hour To listen to show click below Listen live or later ...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Jan 30, 2008 8:12 pm
Dear Carol, You are most welcome. We have quite a number of t2w members in Lincoln, NE, and I am pleased to keep all of you informed of poetry and writing...
35547
wings081
Jan 30, 2008 10:36 pm
Dear Carol Pardon me for taking a peek at your note to Suzianne. We are all so pleased you've been given a clean bill of health from the doc. OK go ahead and...
35548
rede2rollbaby
Jan 30, 2008 11:16 pm
"The Alien Within". Complex, is the burdening duplicity, lifelong, in a struggle to understand. Often years, before that uncertainty, a mental fluctuation,...
35549
Jasmine K
moonshinegarden
Jan 31, 2008 6:39 pm
Hi everyone, My name is Jasmine Kang. I just joined the group a few days ago. I like the outdoors, beach, writing, painting/drawing, photography, film and...
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Carol
carol_emt87
Jan 31, 2008 7:26 pm
Dear Wings, Thank you for your kind words and offer. I believe our Suzi might have Rex's e-mail. If I had the contact details, I would take care of it myself....
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wings081
Jan 31, 2008 10:20 pm
Dear Jasmine Welcome to this group of dedicated writers and poets of every nationality and from every walk of life. Regarding an endorsement for your book: Why...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Feb 1, 2008 2:38 am
Dear Carol, Here you go...Rex Walton's addy is rexwalton@... Drop him a note and ask him to add you to his mailing list. I am sure he would be happy to...
