Hi Alba You ask why only live to 35. Now I'm in a quandary as to whether or not my reply should be posted to you off site But `in for a penny, in for a pound'...
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lynnjr2152
Dec 3, 2006 11:01 pm
ANGELS NEARBY When I was thirteen my grandma passed away. I was so close to her, there was nothing I could say. My momma said Don't be sad, she has gone God's...
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jesse45039
Dec 3, 2006 11:03 pm
Wings, Have you written any chapters about your visions? The future sounds like a twisted utopia. I'd read it if you wrote it. Jesse ... posted ... going ... ...
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halukdireskeneli
halukdireske...
Dec 3, 2006 11:12 pm
No More Subcontracting Dear Colleagues These days, an important long-term issue is on the agenda at this end. Let me try to explain and share it written...
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rede2rollbaby
Dec 4, 2006 10:28 am
G'day Wings, thanks for the comment. The tropical cyclone presents some pretty drastic seafaring conditions on occasion in this neck of the woods but the 'mug...
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Manfred
r_u_sirius2
Dec 4, 2006 10:29 am
Bernie, did you get on the *Bundy and couldn't undo the knots to the dinghy in the marina again?... :o) (Seriously), Wings and Albi express far more eloquantly...
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rede2rollbaby
Dec 4, 2006 10:29 am
G'day Albi, Yes, thanks for that...I shall have a play with a transitional option to bring in the fair weather attraction...a very constructive comment, and...
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Manfred
r_u_sirius2
Dec 4, 2006 10:31 am
Topical? Yes, but seems to be missing something I can't quite put my finger on ... :o( Feel free to rip it to bits. Cheers, Manfred. Fixed in Time (c) Manfred...
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Manfred
r_u_sirius2
Dec 4, 2006 10:34 am
Dear Lynn, I found this piece easy to read and digest. The subject matter, very personal and I sense a relief in it's expression. If I could just comment on...
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Manfred
r_u_sirius2
Dec 4, 2006 10:35 am
Gwenny Dahrlink ... the genesis of 'sharp slivers' was actually a picture in my mind of a Billy Idol with his cheeky smiley face and sticky-uppy haircut...
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Manfred
r_u_sirius2
Dec 4, 2006 10:37 am
Hi Malissa, thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to crit this piece. You are correct, many 'sun' words have been, and will continue to be, ...
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albiaicehouse
Dec 4, 2006 1:05 pm
Cousin Mannie, The logic (on your part), the contrast, and the setting are all here...but I think it lacks depth and personal connection. Sorry, but slaughter...
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rede2rollbaby
Dec 4, 2006 1:09 pm
'Evening Manfred, don't feel it needs too much ripping apart...I had to read it a couple of times to get my none too precise inflection process to come to...
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rede2rollbaby
Dec 4, 2006 1:13 pm
G'day Ron, my kind of humour as well. What I want is a beer that not only loudly proclaims "You're drunk" just below the perscribed blood alcohol level, but as...
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wings081
Dec 4, 2006 2:23 pm
Hi Bernie Re. "Tropical Cyclone and pretty drastic seafaring conditions" Know what you mean my friend. I was just looking up an old logbook and found an entry:...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Dec 4, 2006 2:59 pm
I recently read a biography of G.K. Chesterton and have been reading a number of his essays. There is a good deal of original thought in his works and a lot...
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sentimustheconfused
sentimusthec...
Dec 4, 2006 3:12 pm
I am a newbie to this forum, but not a newbie to writing poetry... Please provide feedback as I have not shared this poem before with anyone except my...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Dec 4, 2006 3:27 pm
... From: ChicagoPoetry.com <chicagopoetry@...> To: suzianne411@... Sent: Sunday, December 3, 2006 3:59:25 PM Subject: Get Your Poetry...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Dec 4, 2006 6:12 pm
Thank you to ChicagoPoetry.com for including ticket2write in their top 100 websites and listing us on their homepage. I hope we will be hearing from more...
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queen_of_cryptic_cyph...
queen_of_cry...
Dec 4, 2006 10:45 pm
Dear Uncle Manny, How I detest the formalist in you. But I must protest in silence as you read my free verse eh? I disagree with Albi about the details of your...
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jesse45039
Dec 5, 2006 9:23 am
I found this very interesting. I too have worked extensively in engineering and construction of large projects. In my case it has been mostly steel mills (less...
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albiaicehouse
Dec 5, 2006 9:25 am
Sentimus, I really like the lines: "Our love is alive with the tremor of being I'm constantly fleeing and growing and seeing" I'm not the best at helping with...
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queen_of_cryptic_cyph...
queen_of_cry...
Dec 5, 2006 3:49 pm
TRILOGY For before: Black satin and lace chemise a spray of roses on king size spread two demitasses and hand-dipped dark chocolate strawberries drizzled with...
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queen_of_cryptic_cyph...
queen_of_cry...
Dec 5, 2006 3:50 pm
Sentimus, This is an emotionally wrought poem with a lot of extreme feelings. That contrast is good in writing, but I think the details themselves lack focus,...
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Donnalee M.
thepoetshere
Dec 5, 2006 5:05 pm
Hi, and a joyous Christmas to all! Thanks for the wonderful comments. As many of you now know, I'm Donnalee. My hubby is Ron. I've just had a wonderful idea...
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queen_of_cryptic_cyph...
queen_of_cry...
Dec 5, 2006 7:41 pm
Uncle Manny, I am appologizing for my last post. I came across derogatory perhaps, and didn't mean to. I was playing on the feud betwen formalist and free...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Dec 5, 2006 7:51 pm
Dear Donnalee...Merry Christmas to you, too. You provided some good ideas to brighten the holidays. I would like to remind people of the USO, an organization...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Dec 5, 2006 8:10 pm
Dear Gwen...I don't think anyone would think you were being mean. Your consideration of the feud betwen formalist and free versers reflects the internal...
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Manfred
r_u_sirius2
Dec 5, 2006 11:21 pm
I concur Susan ... often it's good to step outside of comfort zones to expand a bit ... the rewards are there. Cheers, Manfred....
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Manfred
r_u_sirius2
Dec 5, 2006 11:24 pm
No apology was accepted, cause none was needed. I place great value in any who step outside their comfort zone to comment/crit ... and yes, it's a challenge...
