We Hurt We hurt....we cry And we ask ourselves why We stumble...we tumble When our life seems to crumble We smile...for awhile Then we go that extra mile We...
Walking in the moments that make up a dog day laughing away all the hours that come your way sitting quietly reaching for the sky you get lost in a dream it...
Hello everyone, I'm looking for critiques and advice on my prelude and I promise to return the favor! DEATH OF INNOCENCE, a detective/police/crime, complete at...
haiku: dusk sea van gogh at work poem; the clothesline talking about incisive mind; my life's laid bare on my clothesline right under the sun if noosy...
Music Pounding Bang Bang Everything's got a rhythm Everything's got a need People sweating moving Tearing into the music Beat by sordid beat Eyes glazed bodies...
A notion of standing still in motion A reflection of reaching out towards introspection A nation struggling in vain for transformation Kate 4.30.04 ...
I agree... It's missing something. I've written several that were not quite the whole story. If you've got suggestions, I'm listening. Thanks for reading! ...
Thank you for the invite, though I wasn't sure which profile on this account that you sent it to, but I am here. Thanx for the invitation and I look forward to...
Trevor, I hope you are having fun on this special day. Many happy returns my friend, and thank you for all you do behind the scenes to make Ticket2Write the...
I need to work on this. Thanks for looking at it. ... __________________________________ Do you Yahoo!? Win a $20,000 Career Makeover at Yahoo! HotJobs ...
Hi Sharon, I responded to this earlier, but something apparently happened to the message. The subject matter is very timely and promising, I think, but there...
Thanks, Jake. As you have noted, it is difficult to edit ones own work and the spell checker won't catch words that are spelled correctly but used incorrectly....
High is the Mountain By Sam Adams CHAPTER NINETEEN Zeke was an early riser, but the others woke him when they got up and began readying themselves for work....
Hi Chris, The writing here is generally very good, but there's something about it that doesn't quite ring right. It is written in first person, but the tone is...
No problem Sam, I have the same problem. I get fouled up in POV slips and go into telling instead of showing. I watch for it but it creeps up on me like a...
Beyond The Inside Johnny go down The water rush over Father hold hand And Mother smile loud Johnny don't understand Just know it's the answer Never had a...
in the cold water penguins swim from the orca but here it is warm her milk feeds her young children til she dies without penguin in the warm water the white...
On a darkened summer night steam was rising in the air she was standing in the light a cool breeze played with his hair she walked into the room then gently...
Dear Tony...What in the world were you drinking or smoking when you did this? English teachers all over the US and UK must be tearing out their hair in...
re: Sorry to be so hard on you, but this is an experiment that went terribly wrong. Suzianne :) I just love your critiques... Perhaps this "poem" was written...
Jim Nasium
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May 3, 2004 11:22 pm
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Seeds. A Thousands seeds spread out Moving among the rocks, stones, hard earth. Which ones will endure, Through draughts, winds, sand. Finding fertile ground ...
BULLDOZER PRINTS ... The roots of a sapling with six rings inside have clawed deep into the orange mud since my birthday. I have no rings or leaves, only legs...
Seeds. A Thousands seeds spread out Moving among the rocks, stones, hard earth. Which ones will endure, Through draughts, winds, sand. Finding fertile ground ...
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