Hi Mellisa Why did I consider your tale may come under scifi? Perhaps I should have waited for the next or subsequent instalments. However a screen descending...
In late 70s, we had social chaos in Ankara. I was in the 3rd year of mechanical engineering undergraduate program in Middle East Technical University. I...
I found this interesting. You have initiated the comfortableness of the dectectives working together. You have piqued my interest. I am very curious to see how...
Susan, Though I live in Georgia now, I am a born and raised Canadian. Thanks for including "US"! There are so many great Canadian writers out there. HAPPY...
Thorns So many thoughts fly through my spirit so many lines in a torrent stream So many screams and songs are flying which one to pick which one to see? First...
AFTERGLOW Face to face in the afterglow as fingers' featherlight caress steal silently across her brow and trail tactile whispers down to the hollow of her...
- Thanks for your kind comments. I've picked up on a few tense issues as well. Rewrites will come when I finish I guess. lol Up to about 14 chapters, so...
"Meaningless" and "depressing" for those who can't feel the depth of a literary message, for those who have nothing to do with literary interpretation! Anyway,...
sonora, does this mean that unless we think your writing is wonderful, full of meaning and literary value, you don't want to hear from us? cin and buckaroo ......
QUESTION MARKS Love, fragile crystal curio, noble feeling with such ephemeral existence, I still find you here, in the same place, on the same shelf where I...
publishing a newsletter on ancient manuscripts--or for that matter publishing anything--is much like a birthing experience. This morning about 5 AM, knowing...
I had some problems with the beginning. I'm not from Chicago so I didn't know where Aurora was. It bumped me out of the story. I liked the first line in the...
Bill, thank you for your kind comments. You are probably right about the cops dialogue. That's something I'm working on. I've gone back over the dialogue a...
Wings....you would be correct about the horror genre...except perhaps a little less horror and a little more psychological thriller.....What I have submitted...
Thank you for your kind comments. Let me clarify about the screen a little so everyone will understand where I'm coming from. I am setting this book in my...
Cyber Madness Are ya naked? Are you hot? Got a picture? Whatcha wearin' now? God, I want you I'm so hot Talk to me dirty Make me now Do me harder I can't wait ...
Cin (and Buckaroo)--Good question..isn't the point of critique to hear the good and the bad so that we may all grow as writers and as people??? Melissa ... ...
No, Cynthia, I didn't mean that! I dont know why you have misinterpreted my answer so much! But as long as I write poetry or any other kind of literature it...
I'm new to this list but isn't this: "Another in a long line of meaningless and depressing poems but you do have a certain style and a imaginative use of...
Great point, Sorana!!! I hope you do not take offense to my reply to Cynthia's question....you are so right to say what you have. I also believe that poetry,...
