Ths is a new revision of Nigerian Fraud, ignore...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Jun 30, 2003 2:33 pm
Dear Haluk, I always look forward to reading your stories. They are gentle vignettes of life through your eyes. In a very strange way, they remind me of...
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sensualwordz@...
sensualwordz
Jun 30, 2003 2:37 pm
very lonely feeling after reading that I once was on a list and we were supposed to write a story with sounds that was a challenge but it reminds me of this...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Jun 30, 2003 2:58 pm
CHALLENGE? Good idea...It's been a few weeks since the last challenge here, and you struck a chord with your message. I think being lonely is the source of...
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Michael
arrow48_1999
Jun 30, 2003 3:40 pm
Very nice, I liked this very much. Michael ... ===== Remember that despite all its sham and drudgery, the world is still a beautiful place, filled with...
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gwen_m
Jun 30, 2003 4:52 pm
I am in the middle of putting my novel back together after I had it professionally edited. Any tips on tackling such a job?...
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sensualwordz@...
sensualwordz
Jun 30, 2003 4:52 pm
(In my meditation book this morning) there is the line that says This is not a good place for me to be.... My relationship with a man ended 3 months...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Jun 30, 2003 5:03 pm
Dear Gwen, The answer to that question could take up a whole book in itself. LOL It does remind we of what one professor once told his class..."Anyone can...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Jun 30, 2003 5:17 pm
Dear Friends and Fellow Writers: We are going to have another ticket2write chat session Tuesday. It will be at 7 pm Chicago time, 8 pm New York time, 6 pm in ...
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gwen_m
Jun 30, 2003 5:57 pm
Susan- Thanks! I have had it set aside now for four weeks and have a 2 publishers interested in looking at it so .. the tan will have to wait. I have, however...
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jeffthethird
Jun 30, 2003 7:35 pm
despite no longer having a modem on my home instrument, and somehow getting unsubbed. I'll be here from time to time, with no guarantees on regularity, but do...
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Jesse
jesse45034
Jun 30, 2003 7:50 pm
How can you be so sure it is a scam? Have you been approached by a publisher in Thailand and what is the company name? I have never heard of such a scam, but I...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Jun 30, 2003 8:21 pm
Glad to see you here, Jeff....we did not unsubscribe you. The Yahoo system "bounces" people when their messages are returned because mailboxes are closed or...
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Barbara Navarro
littledoe1956
Jun 30, 2003 9:42 pm
hey did you guys rea the poem hope cause i entered it at poetry.com with 4 others. Barbara/littledoe1956...
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Melissa
honeybeemel_32
Jun 30, 2003 10:36 pm
This is a novel I am currently working on. So far, what you see here is all I actually have on paper-the rest is pretty much all mapped out in my head so it's...
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wings081
Jun 30, 2003 11:24 pm
Hi Melissa Interesting cross between crime and scifi. Short critique; "Road laden with trees" too heavy a description of a tree lined road unless of course you...
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Melissa
honeybeemel_32
Jul 1, 2003 1:30 am
Thank you for your critique. I'm a little confused though, what part did you consider to be sci-fi? I actually did not intend for anything about it to fit...
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Harlequinn Eyes
harlequinneyes
Jul 1, 2003 1:30 am
Essences The essence of need is written in your soul Do what you feel not what your told The essence of need is deep for you to feel Like talons in your mind ...
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Harlequinn Eyes
harlequinneyes
Jul 1, 2003 1:31 am
Flight Falling through the mists of love you're falling captured on a wing still falling Dreaming as the colors fold keep dreaming the music will unwind for...
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Elaine Westheimer
pretea2000
Jul 1, 2003 1:31 am
Marie, I wrote the original version, which I posted not long before this one, as a simple takeoff on Seuss. But then I got to thinking about the poor kid who...
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Harlequinn Eyes
harlequinneyes
Jul 1, 2003 1:32 am
Siren's Song The quiet call drifts through my window this silent call from a voice afar Like a lonesome ghost it calls so empty in tears of pain of love long...
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william herring
herringstuff
Jul 1, 2003 1:33 am
Martin, I tried to read your piece with the objective point of view of someone who does not generally buy fantasy genre books. On the first read-through some...
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bluejay_2112
Jul 1, 2003 2:01 am
Thanks for these book titles, Suzianne. I put them on my WishList. And thanks to Gwen for asking the question! Janet http://NewAge.BellaOnline.com ...
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Elaine Westheimer
pretea2000
Jul 1, 2003 2:28 am
Charles, Alicia and two other couples once gathered together in this parlor, or in another. Theirs was a group of good friends who entertained each other with...
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william herring
herringstuff
Jul 1, 2003 2:39 am
Melissa, I have mixed feelings about this story. The writing is great and it seems well edited. The story flows nicely and creates real suspense. But those...
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elaine kokas
frebutterfly...
Jul 1, 2003 3:06 am
thank you so much for your advice. i truly appreciate it.i have rewritten the poem and it does sound a lot better. Elaine Westheimer <pretea2000@...>...
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elaine kokas
frebutterfly...
Jul 1, 2003 3:06 am
thank you for your oppinion..i do appreciate it. Susan Donahue <suzianne411@...> wrote:Dear Elaine.....This was perfect for a hot summer's day. It ...
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Scot
starrynight2b4
Jul 1, 2003 4:17 am
I've been following this story with excitement as it unfolds. You have done a wonderful job of slow disclosure that makes me want to know more. That's an...
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Susan Donahue
suzianne411
Jul 1, 2003 5:16 am
Happy Canada Day to our members in the Great White North! You might be interested to know that the public library in Lincoln Nebraka has a big display of books...
