I have a tendency to be really fanatical about little things, so this may not be a big deal to anybody else, but it is to me! Cartoon Network.Com is currently...
I've taken a few hours today to read over submissions for posting at Pokey Oaks. Here are my quick comments: "Stanley Whitfield Reporting" aka "Who's The...
UPdates have been made and the following are available at POFFL: http://www.pokeyoaksfanfic.com NEW! The Girls have a passion for fashion as they strut their...
Hi, everyone, this is me asking for your help. I've posted two different stories on Pokey Oaks so far and I've only gotten two reviews on each. Both Icekings...
I'll read them both tomorrow and either send you private critique or make a public one, your choice. DK ... two ... the ... joined ... from ... people, ... ...
Given that I'm about as excitable as Mojo can be, when I'm waiting to hear news, a speedy answer is always appreciated. As for the critique, public is fine...
To begin with, the writing was well done. You do have a way with purply prose and can certainly create a mood. That said, frankly, even the real episode with...
To be truthful, Hello,Goodbye as it appeared on the fansite was not as I intended it to be. Originally there was going to be a lot more to the story, but then...
The 30 pages or less rule is a practical rule based on three factors: 1. Pokey Oaks, when it was first founded, was told it had "unlimited space." Well,...
Toonzone recently listed the top 100 animated films of all time, as were selected by the Online Film Critics Society, and they had the nerve to put The...
Greetings: After a long discussion with one of the moderators who wants me to make my guidelines a bit clearer, let me begin by telling you what editoral...
The Powerpuff Princess Show! By Supergeek Disclaimer: I don't own the Powerpuff Girls, I just wrote this for fun. Please don't sue me. Narrator: The City of...
A funny, if not entirely original story. It's influences are clear and acknowledged. The idea that Princess takes over Cartoon Network is a good one, to be...
... Not sure that would work. After all, if the girls were really ugly, it would draw everyone's attention, kind of like the way a really bad car wreck draws...
I agree with Dwight on a few of his ideas, Supergeek. He has helped me with many of my stories in the past. However, I was very drawn in by the fast paced...
Hello people, I have a fic here I'd like to get some feedback on. I posted it on ff.net last summer and made a few changes to it since then, but I'm wondering...
A very well thought out and executed story. It's funny, suspenseful and very PPG. My only criticisms are really minor technical things. For instance, "alright"...
I'll take care of the technical things first; that should serve as sufficient 'padding'. This is more a personal preference, but IMO you should use line breaks...
This story is lovely! I really really enjoyed it! You really captured the P= owerpuff girls as the *little girls* they are, great job! I found the whole beach...
The Powerpuff Princess Show! By Supergeek Disclaimer: I don't own the Powerpuff Girls or Beavis and Butt Head, I just wrote this for fun. Please don't sue me...
Hay hay- a good humorous story! Particularly Princess' shameless self-promotion, the monster wanting to bail out of the changed format, and the listless...
... I would agree with the general consensis; this is a good story in several respects. Specifically; it's nice to see the Girls getting a chance to act like...
About Him and the Girls' powers, here's a simple solution, feel free to use it or not; because of Bubbles' wish, the door was left open for Him to fulfill it,...
The rewrites work really well and have fleshed out the plot and the gags. As for Beavis and Butthead, they're MTV toons. I would suggest using Cartoon Network...
First of all, thanks for the feedback on my story. This is the very first PPG fanfic I ever wrote and I admit I have a soft spot for it :) Now, I have to say...
... using Cartoon Network related characters such as Brak and his mantis friend who's name I can't recall at the moment. < That would be Zorak. AKA the Lone...
Yeah, after some consideration, I have to agree, using Beavis and Butt Head was a huge waste of time and space, so I'm cutting them out of the story. I don't...
The Powerpuff Princess Show! By Supergeek Disclaimer: I don't own the Powerpuff Girls, I just wrote this for fun. Please don't sue me for it. Narrator: The...
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