When we started, I noted that a missed story was a strike and three you were out. I cannot have people taken advantage of. Two members reached the strike limit...
Agreed and understood. I am certainly not asking you to change the rules. I screwed up, again, and paid the price, again. It makes me wonder myself, how...
Okay. I'm a bit lost. I accidentally deleted the first email about this month's critique group. Actually, I lied. It wasn't an accident. I wasn't going to...
I just blogged about some myths about 4th of July. Read them at http://PamelaKKinney.blogspot.com . Have a great 4th of July to all Americans here and for...
yeah, there's only three participants this month, so join in, any and everybody. This is the first time I have perticipated in a critique group and it seems...
Oh damn it! I would submit something but I'm away from the flash drive with my writing. I can just wait until next month. The story I have ready is okay, but...
OK, I admit it, I dumped "Wanted" because of the language. Too much profanity is like too much Tabasco sauce; might seem like a good idea at the time, but...
Yeah, some of that stuff (in "Wanted") made me groan, but after they got things rolling and past the Fight Club wannabe stuff, it rocks. But, I think with a...
Send it to Keith by the 1st of next month. Don't worry about content; if there is a point to it and it's not sex for sex sake, works in the story, do what you...
Ah. Thanks for the help. In the scene, the protagonist (Annabelle) has sex with another character (Jonathon) who has observed her for a while. I know that...
As far as the Asian horror remakes go, I think that's a pretty safe bet since most people (who I know) would rather watch a remake than sit through a movie...
The Happening looks like it'll be great. Hellboy and Journey to the Center of the Earth too. Karen When you look at yourself from a universal standpoint,...
I haven't been back to this group in almost six years. Was wondering if any old faces popped up. some of you guys MAY remember me. My old username was...
Okay I've been in this group for a few weeks now, and I've read every post (some 50+ a week) and been relatively quiet. However, I've been reading some posts...
Jon, I am with you... "Unnecessary Sex scenes" indeed. Who says they are? Show me the inverse... "Necessary sex scenes"... Of course some perverts cdannot...
Hellboy 2: The Golden Army is a lot of fun. I found the mythology of the Golden Army and the Prince to be the strengths of the movie, some amazing visuals...
I am so excited. You can now view the Haunted Richmond book video up at YouTube.. You can now view it at YouTube. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SUqyeoSb4n8 A...
Well, at least I sparked some talk. I don't really enjoy uncecessasry sex scenes. I do enjoy plot and story and character development. Although, I can see why...
Though I'm not in the critique group, I would like to point out that there is a lack of healthy sexual relationships in movies, TVs, literature, etc... because...
... ============= Though I'm not in the critique group, I would like to point out that there is a lack of healthy sexual relationships in movies, TVs,...
I know most people don't have healthy sex lives. But instead of making art that has unhealthy sex lives, maybe people could take a few minutes and find out...
Love to have you join in... Basically we just do stories and then submit them to Keith who parcels them out and we critique each others work as to what we...
Yep! ... submit them to Keith who parcels them out and we critique each others work as to what we feel... in a sensitive manner. No sharking or aggressing,...
<patting myself on the back for not getting involved in this thread> ... --Grayson ... story and character development. Although, I can see why some of you ...
Keith, you remind me of the old cartoon... "Foghorn J. Leghorn." The one where he grabs the dog and jams his mouth full of a watermelon, then whacks his butt...
Why so, Graygirl? Spider-ific ... ============= <patting myself on the back for not getting involved in this thread> ... --Grayson ... story and character...
Need I remind you Authors are paid by word count? It's our job to make every word count, and anything further on my part in regard to the topic would have been...
HAH!!! Gotcha... Smug Spider ... ============= Need I remind you Authors are paid by word count? It's our job to make every word count, and anything further on...
For better or for worse, art is rarely about things working out perfectly, or even well, as this is not evident in the human condition. Artwork that strays too...
