I've been trying to write a book for a long time. But all I can write is short stories because the action happens so quickly. I know I should slow down but I
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It sounds like she has reason to be grouchy. I'd make it your goal to finish the book, then go back in and rewrite her dialogue to sound sarcastic and fun