THE PASSION OF MY GOD I Palm Sunday You who were not chosen see another sorrowing day . . . . . . uncut palms . . . Sunday, yes Sunday, the first day of the...
Hey everyone. I've been sending in a couple of old haiku for feedback in revisions before I sent them out next week. One of them will be sent out tomorrow and...
april fools day bright and sunny hanging up wind chimes love and peaces isa in istanbul -- "We do not inherit the Earth from our parents. We borrow it from our...
No rain for a month, then it comes on April Fool's Day - should we believe it? We had some rain today in Athens, Georgia, USA, after a month or more of no...
i can believe it..... i suggest shortening your haiku a tinch. I count 18 syllables. It would help the metre. rw perhaps: no rain; then on April Fool's Day...
i can believe it..... i suggest shortening your haiku a tinch. I count 18 syllables. It would help the metre. rw perhaps: no rain; then on April Fool's Day...
robin's funeral... she wipes her nose on the mother's sleeve spring morning - all the trills I could sing if I was this bird [inspired by a poem of Bill...
april fools ... look who is here to tell us ! GABI smile, smile, smile ! and a big hug to ALL april fools in this world, including me ! ... more of no rain....
Beautiful verse. I especially like "spring morning." Memorable, excellent metre, and a joy to read. It should be entered in a contest. robert wilson...
april fools ... look who is here to tell us ! GABI smile, smile, smile ! and a big hug to ALL april fools in this world, including me ! ___________________ ...
I like what you say, Dana-Maria. There will always be better and always be worse, and even that is a mixed bag. Art is subjective; what one likes, another...
Right now I am watching NHK (Japan National TV, in Japanese) and they are broadcasting "The Japan Haiku Competition". It is evident from this that haiku is an...
Here's a new haiku, senryu and tanka on a tanker I saw on the lake from my window and binoculars. I'm not sure or don't remember if you can submit tankas...
Right now I am watching NHK (Japan National TV, in Japanese) and they are broadcasting "The Japan Haiku Competition". It is evident from this that haiku is an...
... herre re some suggestions for the haiku. I suggest tightening the tanka. rw ... spring weather . . . a tanker on the lake making ripples ... a tanker ...
Hey Robert and gang. Here's my revision of my haiku, senyru and tanka. Let me know if it's better. Kristen nice spring weather . . . a tanker on calm lake- ...
Here's my rewrite of this haiku. Let me know if this is better. Kristen harvest moon shines extra bright- highlights wheat field. Kristen, The problem with...
Dear Johnye thanks for a great lesson. Tontoism ... very difficult indeed also for us people who are not native speakers ... I would like your version even...
. global warming <> today we have snow on the cherry blossoms not a good photo but cold ... http://haikuandhappiness.blogspot.com/2007/04/snow-on-cherry.html ...
Dear Dana-Maria- These are indeed beautiful. You bring up a very interesting point about contests. As a very little girl, I realized that being 'the best' of...
