This is a list for people who write fanfiction in shoujo anime/manga series and want to get serious critique on their stories while writing them. By serious, I mean beyond "Oh, that was a nice story, I liked it", I mean "Yes, it was really good, but you could have...".

This is NOT a list for people who get mad because someone gently suggests using a spellchecker, although basic rules of courtesy most certainly apply. Basically, if you can't find any thing nice to say, say what you can as nicely as you can. ^_^