Us and Them A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) Bars all around — on the bare, worn branches, my family. /zh.r The crowd grows larger...
The Untrue A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & John W. Sexton (jws) Chink, chink chink -- only the false water drip of hidden blackbirds. /jws High alpine...
Another Beginning A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Dr. Vidur Jyoti (vj) Summer clouds — monks beneath a tree mutter prayers. /vj A grove of Margosa trees...
Onset A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs) Wedding march — rose peals precede a bride's footsteps. /gc Off to fetch the newspaper — /vs ...
rose petals? And in the air, how about pestles and bricks? <grin> ... From: Vaughn Seward To: renhai@yahoogroups.com Sent: Wednesday, June 10, 2009 11:05 PM ...
Yes, I wondered about that too and assumed they were called "rose peals" in this context. Gillena, can you shed some light on this please? Thanks, Vaughn...
Droppings A Renhai by John W. Sexton (jws) & Vaughn Seward (vs) Honey sandwich fumbled... which side will turn up? /vs Broken hive, a static of bees —...
Hi hortensia; i see this one gave you a bit of a chuckle; our intent though wasn't the effect of senyru, we were more so juxtaposing, in a spontaneous kind of...
Now Here, Soon Gone A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) The odd cloud here and there, the sun pokes through. /vs Ladybug on my thumb tip...
Seaside Breeze A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc) Bright day — a seagull, then another lands nearby. /vs The salty breeze on my face —...
Portraits in the Sky A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs) Aurora borealis — green glowing sheets erupt in silence. /vs Twin orbs in the...
Be My Guest A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs) Through the garden, he walks ever so slowly — the size of a fist. /zh.r The sound of...
I am interested in writing renhai.  Joanne "Life is a comedy to those who think ... and a tragedy to those who feel." Henry Walpole  "We do not inherit the...
Joanne, That would be terrific. If there are any others interested then we can make up teams, otherwise you and I can write one off-line and post our results...
So far Nakaya and Vidur have expressed interest in writing a Renhai. Let's wait a couple of more days and then we'll either pair up or perhaps we can do a...
In the Thick of It A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs) Faint figures sway mutely before me — thoughts thicken. /jt Earth and sky joined...
Thanks John, Vidur, and Nakaya. Would each of you prefer to do group step-by-step project (i.e. "watching" two members work through a renhai), or pair up and...
I would prefer to work in pairs; perhaps one renhai with one pair and switch to produce a second renhai with the second pairing. However, I will do what works...
Summer Renhai Workshop: Okay, I will assume the others (Nakaya and Vidur) will be happy with working in pairs. May I suggest the following match-up for the...
sounds great! Okay, how do we start?  Joanne "Life is a comedy to those who think ... and a tragedy to those who feel." Henry Walpole  "We do not inherit...
Joanne, To get started we contact our partner (which you and I have done) and then start your renhai off-line. Also, post a message here to inform others you...
Grains A Renhai by John W. Sexton (jws) & Vaughn Seward (vs) The sun rises over the red planet as Phobos sets. /vs Ghost-river in its arid bed — /jws the...
Wee Interactions A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt) Buzzing bees swarm around spirea laden with pollen. /vs An ant scurries higher —...