Be My Guest A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs) Through the garden, he walks ever so slowly — the size of a fist. /zh.r The sound of...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 1, 2009 10:41 pm
If there are any members in this forum interested in writing a Renhai, please reply to this message or send me a private email. Vaughn Seward...
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Nakaya
kumanakaya
Jul 3, 2009 6:21 pm
I am interested in writing renhai.  Joanne "Life is a comedy to those who think ... and a tragedy to those who feel." Henry Walpole  "We do not inherit the...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 4, 2009 1:28 am
Joanne, That would be terrific. If there are any others interested then we can make up teams, otherwise you and I can write one off-line and post our results...
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Dr.Vidur Jyoti
jyotividur
Jul 4, 2009 5:24 am
Hi Vaughn,Can I offer myself to be included in this endeavour? Thanks, vidur 2009/7/4 Vaughn Seward <vaughn@...> ... -- Vidur Jyoti ...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 6, 2009 2:48 am
So far Nakaya and Vidur have expressed interest in writing a Renhai. Let's wait a couple of more days and then we'll either pair up or perhaps we can do a...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 6, 2009 2:50 am
In the Thick of It A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs) Faint figures sway mutely before me — thoughts thicken. /jt Earth and sky joined...
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John Daleiden
daleidenj
Jul 6, 2009 1:47 pm
Hello Vaughn, Â Vaughn, include me in this renhai project. Â John Daleiden jd ... From: Vaughn Seward <vaughn@...> Subject: [renhai] Re:...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 9, 2009 2:26 am
Thanks John, Vidur, and Nakaya. Would each of you prefer to do group step-by-step project (i.e. "watching" two members work through a renhai), or pair up and...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 9, 2009 2:28 am
Fleeting Attractions A Renhai by Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) & Vaughn Seward (vs) Patch of phlox — at each flower a bee seems to hurry. /vs Spider web,...
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John Daleiden
daleidenj
Jul 9, 2009 4:17 am
I would prefer to work in pairs; perhaps one renhai with one pair and switch to produce a second renhai with the second pairing. However, I will do what works...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 10, 2009 5:20 pm
Summer Renhai Workshop: Okay, I will assume the others (Nakaya and Vidur) will be happy with working in pairs. May I suggest the following match-up for the...
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Nakaya
kumanakaya
Jul 10, 2009 10:56 pm
sounds great! Okay, how do we start?  Joanne "Life is a comedy to those who think ... and a tragedy to those who feel." Henry Walpole  "We do not inherit...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 12, 2009 4:35 am
Joanne, To get started we contact our partner (which you and I have done) and then start your renhai off-line. Also, post a message here to inform others you...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 12, 2009 9:20 pm
Grains A Renhai by John W. Sexton (jws) & Vaughn Seward (vs) The sun rises over the red planet as Phobos sets. /vs Ghost-river in its arid bed — /jws the...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 15, 2009 12:58 pm
John, Vidur, Have you been able to get started on your renhai? Vaughn...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 16, 2009 1:55 am
Wee Interactions A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt) Buzzing bees swarm around spirea laden with pollen. /vs An ant scurries higher —...
Never a Dull Moment A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) A car speeds off — a pop can and a wrapper added to the trash. /vs Distant...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 24, 2009 1:50 am
Sounds of Rebounding A Renhai by Toshiaki Koike (tk) & Vaughn Seward (vs) Dazzling wall — each voice of summer reflecting off. /tk Sudden heavy downpour...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 26, 2009 4:25 pm
Renhai, a New Verse Form: Frogpond (Summer 2009) An essay I wrote on the orgins of Renhai was published in the Summer (2009) issue of Frogpond (Volume 32,...
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gillena2001
Jul 28, 2009 4:54 pm
Thumbs up much love gillena...
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gillena2001
Jul 28, 2009 4:54 pm
Thumbs up much love gillena...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 29, 2009 1:55 am
Many thanks! Vaughn...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 29, 2009 1:57 am
Popped to Please A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r) A buttery scent emanates from the kitchen — a three-voiced "Popcorn!" /zh.r Each...
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bkaplan297@...
bkaplan297
Jul 29, 2009 4:03 am
Vaughn, I like this one and some others too. May I try one with you? Betty In a message dated 7/28/2009 9:57:19 P.M. Eastern Standard Time, ...
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 29, 2009 2:02 pm
Betty, Certainly. Would you like to start a line (or a 3-line verse), or would you prefer me to start? Vaughn...
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bkaplan297@...
bkaplan297
Jul 29, 2009 10:31 pm
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Vaughn Seward
cflat7
Jul 30, 2009 3:23 am
Betty, Good start, let's connect off-line. Vaughn...
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bkaplan297@...
bkaplan297
Jul 30, 2009 4:00 am
Fine. Let's work off line Betty In a message dated 7/29/2009 11:23:44 P.M. Eastern Standard Time, vaughn@... writes: Betty, Good start, let's...